So far this story is pretty good. I went to your website and i was unable to find the bonus version of this chapter. The title Cowpie is underlined as if to be a link to itself but when i try to click on it, its not a link, just a underlined title. Be nice to read the bonus material, if you have a link for it pls let me know.

Wow, I ended up staying up till 2:30am because I couldn't stop myself from finishing this fic. O.O Awesome AU fic, loved it!

good fic

i like the liberties you took and how different you made their relationship :)

Whoa. Whoa. WHOA! This was a very eventful chapter. I didn't even think about Julian being rescued! Not only did Sarah die but Kimura did too... right? PLEASE update soon!

I'm studying Greek drama in English and were reading about Oedipus (you know, that guy that kills his dad and marries his mom without knowing it, and then they have four kids). When his mom hangs herself out of shame after finding out she married her son, I thought of this story lol

Another awesome chapter full of Julian trying to fool himself into thinking he still loves Sofia. Sad, sad litle man...

this is a very interesting concept one question is julian going to meet an ancestor of a mutant or is there going to be something much more than that?

Then the cow sneezed. His reaction was so extreme that he shot backwards and slammed against the opposing wall.

"HahahaHA!" Laura K. Howlett burst into laughter.

* He has a sibling vibe? Sign language and cute little soft black bunnies as a diversion to check a guy out? Update.

I was gonna review for all 3 chapters but i slammed my finger in the car door today and typing is a little hard.

This is all so random. I like it! Is laura gonna be mute for the whole story? (not that i mind, just curious)

Sibling vibe? Yeah, right! lol Can't wait for an update!

Oh, wow. I like it. a lot. That very last little part in this chap, is/was a big cliffhanger to me. (no answer needed, next part) is she mute, or, did she just stop talking at a very early age that now she can't "form" words? The laughing and neck popping/bruises are making me think on that. Well time for me to go read Year Zero then after that Vol 2 :)

Liking it so far, but I need ch. 2 to get a better hold on the AU part. Update soon?