Woot! Go Ryou for ounching Hunter. I won't lie, THIS is my favorite because of getting a glimpse of Satra's past (even if it is really depressing). She's my favorite OC besides Mir and her sisters, and I just had to reread Ryou standing up to Hunter about a million times. This story is so epicly beautiful and wonderfully crafted. I love your trilogy!

I knew it! I just knew these two would end up feeling something for eachother! Anyway, this was really cute, and I do sincerly apologize for not getting a chance to read and review your stuff lately, so I do promise to go and get back on track with the sequel. Once again, amazing stuff! :D

_ AWWWW! I'm so excited for the new story! I'm literally jumping up and down and squealing on my side of the internet! Thanks for the preview, and now onto the real thing! YESSSS! Hahahahahaha!

Huh. The end.

I haven't been keeping up beta-wise, but I have been at least keeping up with the reading - although I didn't expect the end to be so soon. But it was such a sweet, perfect ending. I almost could have cried, reading those bits that we wrote together and remembering those nights that seem ages ago. X3 Such good times, eh?

Ryou's so sweet, it just makes me want to melt. :) And I love where Emi and Seto have that exchange - "Ready?" "Always." "Such a lie." "I know but it sounded good." That's like my favorite bit of the chapter. :3

Pft. I can't really say everything about this chapter because the review would be like pages long. : D It was so adorable, not lame at all. *hearts* Can't wait for more!

Your fan,

Kit

P.S. Don't forget to email me chapter 11 as well, I didn't get to beta that one either. (:

Sqe~ This chapter was so 're all coming to terms with who they is so painfully shy on the inside even thugh he hides it and Ryou is so cutely shy all around.U should give Satra a little love side interest too,like a small side chappy about her being saved by a random i completely loved the chapter and will be avidly cotinuing reading and reviewing..Im psyched about the next story -

The ending wasn't lame at all- it was perfect. :) I'm going to count the days until you put up your new story. (So far 4!) . I can't wait until the third. Oh, I bet it's Mokuba and Gwyn isn't it? And I'm sorry! I can't help it...I'm emotional when great stories end. D: I know we're going to see great stuff from you in the future. You'll be a famous author or something and all of your reviewers are going to point and say "Hey, I read some of her work on FanFiction!" :D -glomp- THANK YOU FOR KEEPING UP THE EXCELLENT WORK! (And now I'm going to stop typing because I think the brownie I ate gave me a sugar high.)

This was a funny chapter. I giggled aloud after reading the parts where Emi and Mir bickered about marriage and love. XD Anyway, I think it would be interesting if she was blind, too. Heck, thinking about it now, this must be a tough decision for you, but I'm sure either way you'll makes the story equally great. Can't wait for the preview! :3

-gaspith- Is that the last chapter? It was so0o good. I'm going to miss this story... But I'm really looking forward to the preview in the next chapter! Is it going to be with Mokuba and Gwyn? Can't wait for the next story, so please update again soon! And yeah, I love any YuGiOh episode with stuff like that in it. Did you watch that one where Seto and Mokuba got turned into stone? so close yet soo far away! It made me cry...

I'm such an idiot I found this chapter AFTER I PMd you *shakes head*

This was such a great ending! Gwyn got her big moment and was brill, Ryou is so kind and caring looking after Mir like that and Seto and Emi seem to be on the same page. Well, sorta. ;)

I laughed so many times! ("IM GONNA BE RICH" *falls off bed*)

Thank you for another awesome story! I can't wait to read what's coming next.

At an end already? What comes in part three? Wow!

Aww, I can't believe this is the end- but I'm so excited for the new story, Yes! -dances around- lol sorry.

And I still love all the characters in your story whether they are OC's or Seto, mokuba and Ryou! Anyway, I'll be watching for the next story :D

Nyeh? That's the last chapter?O.O Why must you torture me with the lack of fluffiness?TT-TT Next story soon please!3

Awesome really talented at wrigting like this...(About kids stories)

Wow - sorry it took me so long to review.

I did not see this coming - I truly did not...

Gah - maybe Seto and Emi will get themselves straightened out yet? I hope so...

No - of course Mir shouldn't be blind forever. But maybe long enough that Bakura - who is never afraid of darkness, in either of his faces, Yami or Hikari - can teach her to walk in it without fear. Can teach her the joy and safety of moving in shadows, where if you cannot see, neither can you be seen.

Mary Stewart once wrote a book long ago called The Moonspinners - sort of a mystery/romance, which is neither here nor there. But the title comes from a very minor Greek myth, perhaps made up by her even, but her research tended to be good, so my guess is it is merely extremely obscure. Like the fates, the Moonspinners are three goddess. They spin the moon into yarn which is why it wanes, then take it to the sea to wash it, and it all unspins again and waxes till it is full. And then they do it again. But the point is they spin the moon down into darkness to make the night safe for hunted things. Mir is a hunted thing - has been for a long time. Bakura needs to teach her about the safety of darkness.

*giggles* aw Ryou shouldve kissed two are such an adorable match.I love the story and i cant wit to read the sequal