wow. this is just wow. amazingly long for a one shot. i don't know what to say, i feel stupid. lolz. the part esp in the end was just amazing and full of love. eep.

OMG!WOW!*sniff*

That was beautiful!It made me smile so much i think i fell in love with this one-shot!Just amazing how you put that entire thing with all those feelings,all those emotions,everything into this!Well done,i'd say this is excellent!Just loved it!Zack's oocness was to be expected but i loved how Cloud dealt with it all!WOW!Just lovely!

~Technomancer28

I love stories like this where the love felt by the soul transcends the physical limitation of impaired memory. Beautiful story.

~FM :)

I Loved It. I was crying threw out the whole thing, god i loved it so much. I always vry wen Zack and his death is meantion, which dosnt relly help cuz i watch Advent Children whenever i can *sniff* like i said I LOVED IT it was beautiful good job :3

D OMG! i love it D

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So cute! Love it! -

Gah! So pretty! _ ! You're imagery was spot-on! I loved the whole idea behind the story and it was so well written. I loved seeing (an amnesia blured)Zack's view of his own death and of Cloud.

Loved it! And the white feathers thing, I never really thought so much of it, but it seemed like such an important aspect to Zack. -love-

Aw this is amazing! Awesome job! BRAVO!

an excellent piece of work.

:-)

I mean it!

This was amazing (as usual)! Luv you and your stories. Continue being awesome~

Damn that was good!

I think i cryed a little to...damn it! i really gotta stop watching clack amvs and reading fanfics...anyway baka-san really really really like!

This story was so beautiful that I almost cried.

You're amazing writer! Keep on writing more stories, I'm sure there will be much people that think the same as me :D

That was... beautiful, amazing! I can't think of any other way to describe it!

so sweet. this is beautiful.

I think you made me cry. Not many people can do that, Schizzar. Another great story, as always. Just keep it up! Love ya.