The story is well-plotted but has lack of energy. Though ichiruki forever.

Such a cute Story! Poor Ichigo in the end! I would have died if I had been in his position! Really good story, just a some spelling and grammar errors. Otherwise great work!

I burst out laughing when Renji said."Eggs!" LOL

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! IT WAS SO KAWAII! I LOVE ALL THE CHARACTERS! PLEASE KEEP WRITING MORE AWESOME ICHIRUKI STORIES! X3 I'LL B LOOKIN 4WARD 2 THEM!

UR FRIEND,

RUKIA w

Awesome! Amazing! Alright!

interesting story! and i'm really glad you finish it soon ! but i think ichigo and rukia's children have an unusual name .