This is really cute and fun

I enjoyed the read and I hope that you will continue updating as I do like the Jiaang pairing more than the canon kataang.

Just thought I'd bring this up, the logic is inconsistent here:

"She would need to be a Waterbender, of course. I hardly think your people are ready to sacrifice your dwindling number of benders for the Avatar's sake." and the clash

"To our keen advantage, she does not. Thus the chances of producing a second Airbender are more likely. The Fire element is not present to lessen the chances."

why do the water tribes need to offer up a bender, but the fire nation doesn't?

This story is simply brilliant. I hope that you'll update it some day.

Like the pairing, this story is well written and hopefully you have not given up on it and can update soon

Er... Not sure if this is going to just annoy you or what... And I really don't want to get on anyone's bad side, especially on the internet... But... Pretty pretty please update? I'm in love with this story, especially what you've made of the Aang/On Ji pairing. I also like the creation of On Ji's parents and their pasts, and just the overall feel and detail of the story.

will there b a new one

this is great! Great use of a character only glimpsed in the series!

This story is the one of the best well-written Avatar-based stories I've ever come across, and the fact that it uses a non-traditional pairing is wonderful.

Too many times I've seen the cookie-cutter personalities of the TV series recopied verbatim into writing, but this story... this story CREATES and EXPOUNDS.

I love it. Please continue, D.

Brilliant, brilliant story. I'm in love with it.

Write more before my head implodes. Please. xD

Umm. . . quick question . . . Why is this the third time you've posted this chapter? Cuz I really love this story, but it's kinda annoying getting an alert that says there's a new chapter when there's really not. . .

But anyway, like I said, I really like this story! It's well written and has a premise that's similar yet completely different from anything else I've seen. You have OCs that really feel like they belong, and you're doing a great job at keeping everyone in character (which can be really hard, I know). All in all, great story! Keep up the good work!

But please don't delete and repost the same chapter over and over again. You can just replace it instead, and it won't make readers frustrated into thinking that they'll never get a real update.

-Sugarpony

i really enjoy this story. please update :)

I just found this story, and I really like where it's going! I've always liked the idea of Aang and Onji being together. Even though i'm a kataang shipper. So I hope you continue this, it's really great!

I do hope you continue the story, although I have to admit I'm a little skeptical of the selling of the whole Aang/On Ji thing and thats what the entire success of your story will focus on. Good luck and godspeed

I read your last chapter, and I agree with you. I've read your story, and I mean all chapters, and I only just checked the review count.

I was like : O.O...this story deserves much more. I really do hope that you don't give up on this story just because people are too lazy to review a fantastic story.

I enjoyed reading it, and I do hope that you don't let the review count get to you that much (I'm trying that too, though it proves to be a tad hard)

~~ destiny's charm ~~

Disheartening or not, this section of receives less viewers than more popular shows like Inuyasha or Naruto. Then there is the relationships of the characters. Frankly, story with the favorite pairings almost always receive reviews. Although those reviews typically consist of "OH MY GAWD, I