I know this is such an old story but it was so sweet, I loved it to pieces. I wish you were still writing them! God knows there aren't many Mimato authors out there, still.

Cheerio :)

Aweee I love this little Mimato oneshot! I love your writing style and how you convey each character so precisely. It was so cute it gave me a cavity!

Its really great XD
Ah I really loved the way you writte a story
Its so sweet..
Their relationship is so sweet good job XD

Aweeee this was such a cute little oneshot! I loved it!

Ehrmergherrrd its soooo romantique! I had to read more of your stuff after reading yer most recent story. I love love love it! Matt and Mimi are so cute together when you write them! Such good chemistry! I look forward to reading more of your work :D

Omg! That was so cute!

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Omg this was so adorable! It's been a while since I've read (or written) a mimato fanfic!

very sweet indeed.

well done! :D

Wow! I love this story! Becuz I'd prefer Yamato/Matt falling for Mimi instead for Sora(I hate her)... Matt/YamatoXMimi 4ever!

Hehe, I REALLY liked it. It was extremely sweet and it made my heart flutter more than once. I only spotted a couple of grammar mistakes. Other than that the story was excellant.

Good job

~Katie

You were always so sweet to review my old stories, so thanks! ;D

This was really cute and fluffy, I enjoyed it.

Good one! I liked it because even though I'm not into the characters, I could still see them on the bridge sharing their first kiss. Nice touch with them holding hands at the end...all is forgiven...even being late!

Very good! I liked how you worked the personalities of everyone to stay rather true to character. Just a few grammar things to clean up:

"Mimi nodded, “more then you think.”" then should be than.

"Mimi felt her knees turn to jelly, before cluing into the fact that she should return the gesture that she wanted to kiss him back, and was glad when his arms came to rest around her petite waist, otherwise she was sure she’d fall."

A bit of a troublesome sentence for you, so let's see if we can break this up. First of all, you don't need the comma between jelly and before. Secondly, the whole thing seems to be about three points: how she feels, how she wants to return his kiss, and how she's glad about him supporting her body because she'd fall otherwise. Because there are THREE points and not two, you really need to have two different sentences, or you borderline run-on.

Other than that, it was a really spectacular read! Hope that helps! Great job!

Very cute ! I like it :P