| Reviews for Life & Love at Mahora |
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Qaths10 chapter 5 . 5/1/2012 Law fic and I enchant myself, that good that you put the titles honorary because the nonwise truth. I hope you do but fic of this pair so that they enchant haha to me, apart from which it almost does not have of them. luck |
Sif Ivaldi chapter 3 . 11/3/2008 That was too fast! Is there no detail about how Kazumi hooked up with Nodoka? Again, this story would be more entertaining if it is more detailed... |
Sif Ivaldi chapter 2 . 11/3/2008 A very sudden encounter between them... In the bush? Damn, that's hot... it would be great if some scenes are more detailed. Great job by the way! |
Sif Ivaldi chapter 1 . 11/3/2008 Well... uhm, that was interesting. Haha! A pretty nice story with a little mature scenes is certainly enjoyable, though I wish for longer chapters... |
Tyson332 chapter 3 . 11/3/2008 ... ... you turned all the cute innocent students into... sex-monster! O_O Ohh well~ Anyway. So rushed and unrealistic (I mean, really...) that it was already funny again. Dunno if that was intended, but that said, the first two chapters were kind of okay-ish. But then you suddendly jumped from the lighthearted romance/smut genre into the drama/action genre. That was kinda meh... not a very good decision, in my opinion. Well, I guess Ill wait for another chap and see if you manage to turn the tables and get back to the style of your previous chapters. ) |
Tear Here chapter 2 . 10/25/2008 Well, that was a bit fast. Anyway, this is pretty good. Update soon. |
DreamShadower chapter 2 . 10/16/2008 WOW! Now that is some serious blackmail. Hehe, though when I picture Kazumi, I see her with Haruna. I wonder how the rest will work out. Only time will tell. :D |
Revolutionary-Girl-S chapter 2 . 10/16/2008 Well it's a little too much for my taste, them just going at it like that; however, you did a good job. It just seemed to move freakishly fast. It's a relief to read a different mood. And you kept up with their personalities. Half the class is gay-we wish, right? Kazumi and Nodoka threw me off, what about poor Sayo? |