| Reviews for The True Meaning Of Destiny |
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  Jade chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 Umm.. one person can't BE a rebellion. One is a rebel, and the fight/war they start against a force/gov. is a rebellion. The story is going very quickly, and background isn't firmly set, so I'm confused as to what's going on and why these four are automatically a team all of a sudden, fighting rebels in a dead town. Maybe you're trying to obviously get straight to the point, like a drabble, but it's not working in a story structured in the way you're suggesting. Otherwise, good use of vocab. and some humor. P.S.: I know I'm about fourteen years late to be reviewing this to you, but I choose to believe you'll read it anyways, even if you are fully aware of the things I'm pointing out. .~ |
 Sylke chapter 13 . 5/26/2011 cool i love this story but can you tell me what song is wind's nocturn? |
| Patricia chapter 13 . 1/8/2010 LOVED IT! |
| snowy-night chapter 13 . 5/6/2008 cute _ |
| tennislover431 chapter 13 . 11/30/2007 ahaha so cute...they videotaped it... you gotta love your best friends lol |
| tennislover431 chapter 12 . 11/30/2007 wat? stupid hitoshi! |
| tennislover431 chapter 11 . 11/30/2007 ah! so kawaii! |
| tennislover431 chapter 10 . 11/30/2007 / |
| tennislover431 chapter 9 . 11/30/2007 i hope sakura doesnt die / |
| tennislover431 chapter 8 . 11/30/2007 syaoran is so sweet ]] and hes falling for her bad |
| tennislover431 chapter 7 . 11/30/2007 yayy syaoran you did it ] |
| tennislover431 chapter 6 . 11/30/2007 well now they found each other and they wont be alone anymore ] |
| tennislover431 chapter 5 . 11/30/2007 wo go syaoran! |
| tennislover431 chapter 4 . 11/30/2007 (gasp) oh no sakuras been kidnapped |
| tennislover431 chapter 3 . 11/30/2007 syaorans falling for her yes ] |
