I just stumbled on your story and I LOVE it! I hope you can update soon! Pleas! :D

I love your story! I can't wait for the next update.

Hey dude, love your story but when are roy and riza gunna find each other?! Its killing me! Great story though. ;)

Ok so I read your story last night and now I'm taking time to review it. Your story deserves it ;-)
I love your story, it's so original and OMG, Roy finds himself in France, now I will always think I might meet him anytime I'll go to Paris ! It's so cute the name you chose for the other characters (Antoinette, very french !)
Riza, working for an horlogist : OMG, I completely fell for this idea, I don't know, I think it suits to her very well !
But, pleaaaaase, now we are on the 16th chapter and they didn't meet ?! I think I'm going to be crazy, they need to see each other *starting to cry*
Don't get it wrong, I really like Jack and Claire, but we both know Roy and Riza belong to each other, right ?

I trust you, I haven't been disappointed so far by your fic :) Keep writing please !
And as we say in France "Bon courage" (in case you're lack of inspiration/time)

Oh goodie I'm so glad you came back! Can't wait to see what happens - go Royai though! _

I've always wondered what everything would be like if Riza and Roy made their way to the other side of the gate. This shows a really good theory on what it would be like.
They should meet back soon. Is this going to be Royai?
On a side note, Havoc does seem French.
Update sometime, hopefully soon :)

Just found this story today, and I'm really interested in it! I really want Hawkeye and Mustang to cross paths, and I wonder about the language barrier...

I really like how both of them treat the situation! I guess Hawkeye is more convinced that Mustang is still alive(in their original world), and I'm really interested to see how Mustang will treat her relationship with Jack. I can't wait until the next chapter!

hm I wanna see Roy with Riza and not with their European versions XD

Will you let Roy and Riza be together or you'll let them be with Clare/Jack?

Please updatee!

Love it so far! Though it breaks my heart that Roy and Riza are separated from each other... will they meet up soon? Can't wait for an update!

This is really good so far! I hope Roy and Riza meet up soon. I love your characters and can't wait to read more!

p.s. - It would be cool to have them meet up with Ed and Al as well! Again, I love it!

Hey just read your story so far

It's definitely an interesting and original take on Full metal. Love it!

It's so cool how they're living their lives in an ulternate universe, and yet bumping into their replica's and stuff _ Also i just kinda love how you put the Rockbells in... lol cool

Can't wait for when Roy go's to London and reunites with the REAL HAWKEYE _

Update soon! CAN"T WAIT!

good luck

Hate to be the one to break it to you kiddo, but "mon ga" doesn't mean the gate. It means "the gate is the one that is _" or "THE GATE is." Japanese people often add "ga" (that vaguely can be translated to "is the one that is". It adds emphasis to the phrase that comes before. Like "Joe ga urusai" means "Joe is the one who's loud," urusai meaning loud.) to their phrases. Or wa ("is"). The word "Gate" in Japanese is simply "mon".

Okay, time to actually read the story.

Hi!I love this fanfiction,It's perfect!I hope you continue it (because there are some people that don't continue writing their fanfiction)keep the good work!And I want to see the real Riza meeting the real Roy xD

P.S-I'm sorry if there are any grammar or spelling mistakes,because I'm brazilian and I'm still studing english at school.

omg Your story is getting even better now *O* I love it! I wanna see real Roy meeting real Riza too!

Ooh, so Hawkeye's father is known by Jack? Interesting! :D I'm looking forward to hearing about that.