This was pretty enticing and seemed realistic to boot. I am wondering if you have thought about adding onto this story line, perhaps throw that girl you mentioned, and her family and friends, and perhaps Jesus Himself, along with angelic warrior characters? I would like to see it become developed into a lengthy (not too lengthy) story mainly because I am curious to see where it'll go. I did enjoy this very much. And so I will favorite it.

First of all, kudos for a unique perspective of Hell. I like the idea of a frozen Hell rather than a firey one.

This is well written. I like how this story sets up for a second chapter or a series of chapters. Plus you've intruiged me enough to want to know why he so carefully created a mask of "hatred and malevolence"; does he not truely feel that way? What is the demon's true purpose of going to the priest and his daughter?