Why does Draco like her all of a sudden ? They are kissing too soon. It is a good story still.

Hey so I wanted to say the writing is great and after the start it moves well but how does Hermione fall in love so quickly and how does Draco admit all the person stuff with his father so quick. Apart from that it’s great.

I like the story so far. The only thing that has me confused is that Draco internally said he was in love with Hermione in the first chapter. And now he’s like love? I can’t be in love with her. It confuses me.

ActAppalled,
I just want to start off with the fact that yhere us only one other fanfic that has made me laugh, cry, and bleed emotionally as this one has. I absolutely fell in love with this fanfic! There was drama, without being overdramatic; there was 'sexy time', without being written porn; there was love, without being desperation or infatuation; there was character growth, signs of maturity, and a driving factor that made each character authentic and true to the books and movies while also being unique to this story. You did an AMAZING job of conveying each and every character with their own stories and inner turmoil, and even the small characters like Pavarati, Lavender and Pansy were conveyed with such care and emotion - no one was left out, and everyone was given a chance to be a part of the story, even if it was only for background or filler description. Your writing is absoluteky beautiful and I love it to bits and pieces!
If I had to pick one thing I didn't like about the story, it would be a lack of Credric Diggory. I know he died in the cannon universe, and I know yiu tried to stick to cannon as much as possible, but I've seen many HP fics that keep him around. He was my favorite Hufflepuff, and I loved his personality. I think he woukd have made a great friend to Hermione when she patrolled the corridors to escape studying and Draco for a bit during the time when Ron and Harry distanced themselves from her.
All in all, I absolutely adored your story. I love everything about it, and your writing style is phenominal. I'm going to read the sequel now 3 I almost started crying when this was over, but when I realized you had a sequel I cheered up real quick! But I'll likely cry when I finish it xD
Thank you for taking the time to write this incredible story, and I wish you luck on all your future endeavors!

Oh my lord. I am many years late to come to this, but let me say this is the best story I have ever read

I really liked this story, the only goading error that confused me slightly was the first few chapters you had Dumbledore alive and as headmaster, then it was switched without warning to McGonagall. other than that it really is a great story

Kinda pissed at Hermione here. I didn't know she was so closed- minded.

In-fucking-tense!

I read every chapter and loved it

Hermione needs to calm the duck down

I love your grateful attitude for every review your fans write! It is refreshing and lovely!

I know it's six years later yet I'm sad for your break-up with your boyfriend and I pray you've moved on to someone who love's you deeply and completely!

Now, I'm off to see what else you've conjured for my reading pleasure!

I found this story during an author search for more stories and was intrigued by 1026 favorites she had listed. This list has provided me with many delightful and sometimes mysterious stories. "Forbidden Necessities" is one of the stories she listed as a favorite.

It's a wonderful story of first love and how such a love may become an incredibly beautiful forever! I really enjoyed it! It was also the first story I've read which ended with graduation! Your ending was nigh on to perfect!

There's one thing I'm going to imagine happening and it is Narcissa healing and coming back into Draco's life! I also imagine Harry, Ron and Draco becoming Auror's and getting along

Thank you for writing it!

I'm loving this story and the ranges of emotion you're able to convey from your main characters. I don't know if you still update, but a not you might want to consider... A "paternal mother" is not a thing. Paternal means from the father's side. You can have a paternal grandmother or paternal aunt, but not a mother. Narcissa is simply Draco's mother.

Love this story! Xx

This story was AMAZING. So well written, and such a beautiful story I absolutely loved it! I've been practically glued to the story for two days now, and it's over :( but I can't wait ti read the first chapter of tbe sequel :) thank you so much for writing this