Superb. Wonderful character development and plot line. Very enjoyable reading.

Funniest chapter ever!

I just about to read this one, and I have noticed in your author comment at the start of this story that you got Gerry Anderson name right.

I loved this chapter so incredibly very much (That might not be proper grammar...)! It's so beautiful and wrapped everything in such a lovely way. I especially loved the end with Virgil standing on the balcony just reflecting on everything that'd happened. I've always loved Virgil artistic way of thinking and it's nice to see inside his head when everything is, as you say at the end, "as it should be."
Thank you so much for all of your writings. I think I've read every one, (but I'm going to double check just to be sure of courseYou write a beautiful story and it makes me feel so happy whenever I've finished another work of yours, even if it's often bitter sweet. I think for once that I've run our of things to say, xoxo,

~AnAlmostAuthor

I know this story was written years ago and your not really active anymore and I wasn't planning to review until. I'd finished the story so you wouldn't get like 27 notifications for a site that you didn't even use anymore. But alas. I have failed to keep in my excitement and I feel like it'd be wrong not to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. It's absolutely amazing! And even though you actually had my favorite brother (Virgil) actually breathing, I have forgiven you for that by the way, I have laughed and cried and at times have wanted nothing more than to give the Tracy boys a hug and assure them that each of them are alright. You paint an amazing picture with your words and weave a story like a tapestry. I absolutely adore your character Dr. Thomas Palmar he's amazing and I honestly wish he was in the show, TOS and TAG both. Andy Meyers as well, I'm so happy that he's going to be in this story as well. I honestly squealed when Jeff suggested calling him. Anyway thanks again for writing this, and all of your stories, I hope that where ever you are today that you're still writing because you truly have a gift. I wish you all the best,

~AnAlmostAuthor

I just want to say that I love this story.
I’ve lost count as to how many times I’ve read it, I love the way it’s written, the story line, the characters...everything
Although I don’t mind watching the Thunderbirds film I definitely love the fan fiction stories that have come about because of it, especially this one. This story is what the 2004 should have been in my opinion
I don’t know if you will see this review but I just wanted to leave my comments. Awesome job

Hi! I know that this was written over a decade ago, and you probably won't even see this but I'm still going to review!:) I'm 11 years old and the first version of thunderbirds I was introduced to was " Thunderbirds are go" series. I love both of the tv series ( Except the movies,in my opinion they were complete crap.) But I love the fanfics even more. It just shows the family connection between the Tracys, which I find absolutely beautiful. It really filled what I thought was missing, the bonds, the love, the family connections. Keep on doing what u love and I will always support u. ( PS: sorry for any grammar/ content mistakes, my phone's acting up!)

Hi
I know you wrote this almost a decade ago and you're probably now married with kids but I'm new to this fandom(but not to FF) and just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed this cracking bit of storytelling.
Thunderbirds was a huge part of my childhood and even into my twenties,infact my husband proposed whilst watching it and I suppose a certain pilot of Thunderbird 2,despite being a puppet was my first crush.
Anyway just wanted to say thanks.
Oh by the way if there seem to be words mssing from this it's because of my iPads weird relationship with this site.
Hx

What's the name of the story where alen gets scarlet fever

Why does alen have to take antibiotics is there a story before this

Hey, I've got to say, I do enjoy your stories, I've read them multiple times over the years. They are very well written and I love Dr Palmar. Just a question, do you still have the fanfic where Alan catches scarlet fever? Any chance I could read that one again?

Hi, I am loving reading this story. The characters are very identifiable and loving the interactions between the boys.
Just a quick question... is a standard treatment for brushing so why does Alan not have ice on his arm? If it was me I would have ice on those bruises for the first 48hrs and then hot / cold pack for the next week. And for John... You might be suprised at how effective O2 and a cold pack for him can assist in pain relief.
I have had a few major concussions and I have found a cold pack on the forehead and a hot pack on the upper neck can help with the headache and the nausea.
I loved the bit with Virgil - I had guessed Hemothotax... So I was joyfully surprised.
The bit about the imbedded foreign object did not surprise me as much as I have seen this a few times and even had one myself.
I was stung by what looked like a wasp on the back of my neck and was not until I ended up in hospital that it was found - the barb was almost 2cm long - very long for a wasp. I ended up in hospital because I had developed a high fever, vomiting and breathing difficulties.
I am enjoying your story very much. Please write more.
Ngaire

Hi, love this story.
The interactions between the boys has been very entertaining.
I would like to state that I agree with Scott... I would have refused the meds. In fact I have. I broke my neck at work one morning and refused meds until I was in Hospital. I actually knew what injury has occurred and was worried that the pain meds would affect any symptoms. I have done this a few times in my life... I refuse pain meds for broken bones, head injuries and abdominal pain... So that is a few times I have refused pain meds in my life. LOL.

Aww poor John! Really really love the writing style you have go going here!

liking the story so far just finish ready chap 9. can not stop reading.