It was very cute, cliche can still be enjoyable ;)

Don't be so hard on yourself.

The chapter was touching. I liked it!

I think that this was a lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it with us.

don't hate it; so maybe it was a little cliche, but, honestly, what isn't now a days? right?

I liked it and am glad you posted.

-Lucy

loved it but it could have used a good old hot kiss at the end but still just the same it is wonderful writing.

aw so sweet... really sweet... update soon please

HawkAngel