eeww forcing a 18 year old to Mary a 25 year old is gross

Great story

I was really enjoying this story, but I think you need to do a bit of background reading into the UK before doing a story on the royals (I say this as a complete non-expert btw). Bella wouldn't be coronated as a future Princess. The coronation is specifically to become King/Queen. She'd become titled when she married Edward, but that's it, there's no separate ceremony for that, she'd just automatically take his title as she'd also take his name.

On the other hand, I thought the story was a really interesting concept and I am sad that I can't get over my petty (because it is SO petty) need for accuracy. I will definitely check out your other stories.

Aww so cute! Love this ending :)

Wonderful story! Have so enjoyed reading!

Thanks for this sweet story
Regards
LQUEZ

Love this story!
Completed rereading it.

I enjoyed this story.

THis is not negative just, some FYI,
The future king of England has to be married in an Anglican Church.
Future King would always be accompanied by security guards.
The Princesses and Queen would never do someone makeup, they
have staff for that. They might set an talk, though.
There's more. but I'll stop.

Cute story and it was a quick read.

My only negative comment is please next time leave the blushing, insecureness, and crying to a minimum. We all got that the first 10 times you wrote it

Your story was amazing without having her be all of that in nearly every chapter.

I have a blind friend. The touching the face thing isn’t real. They cannot “see” that way. Please do research.

Love It!

I would have liked a little more drama and information in this story. Bella seems to be getting a lot of glares but that's seems to be it. Nothing is revealed and nobody is put in their place.

Bella is in a position of power and should realize she needs to dress the part.

I wasn't expecting the brothers to give their support so easily so I'm surprised. Did they not get the support they were hoping for to remove Edward? I would have liked to understand ho their support was given.

The speech was good but I wish it was better, more powerful. I like how he decided not to bend to their wills. Children all have periods of arrogance or acting spoiled so that shouldn't have even been in the speech. He should have mentioned how Bella makes him stronger and could never be a hindrance like Aro suggested. How even with his handicap he has been training for this position for many years and there is nobody they could find who would be more qualified then him. I would have liked him to respectfully allude to the fact that the royal family will not be bullied. I hate that the story has a group who could unseat Edward and the family at all. Wouldn't Emette be next in line anyway? That doesn't really make sense that the whole royal family could just get the boot.