| Reviews for Oops! |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/12 I can tell this is gonna be one hell of a story...its so random and fun...I love this. |
koseta.a chapter 1 . 6/17 Jeez about halfway thru the first chapter and I almost stopped breathing I was laughing so hard |
Richard1081 chapter 7 . 5/23 Please update soon |
gh chapter 7 . 4/26 most youthful writing, your flames of youth are flaring most brightly! |
M2J MandalorianJedi chapter 5 . 1/14 I have to say, this was one of the most amusing chapters I have ever read. I liked how you made the typical structure of pretty much every fight in the series the standard for which all fights are carried out. I also like how you brought to attention Team Kakashi's penchant for C-Ranks missions going FUBAR. |
DeathPaladin chapter 6 . 11/15/2019 I have a suggestion for solving the issues Tenten raised regarding a sword. Make it full-tang. Increase the durability as high as possible, using whatever super-alloys ninja have. Not that it really matters, he's already got the kanabo and at least it makes him unique... |
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 7 . 11/12/2019 Hahahahaha hilarious. YOUTH! Please go back to writing this. |
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 5 . 11/12/2019 Lol He came in like a wrecking ball~~ |
Chessmasteroftheuniverse chapter 7 . 1/6/2019 What... The freaking... Heck?! This story would probably fit in that naruto show that features rock lee or something, this ridiculousness is crazy. |
Chessmasteroftheuniverse chapter 6 . 1/6/2019 Poor, poor kakashi, did he pick up tsunade's curse of bad gambling that transformed into "Karmic porn"? If you wonder about that, i'll expand on the subject. 1st piece of evidence (though it might just be me) Kakashi ignores the letter stating the truth, in probability to get back to his porn, result: he gets imbedded into a tree. 2nd piece- managed to get porn book back after misshap. Result: gets slammed with a sledgehammer head. Final piece of evidence to "Karmic porn"- he tries to go on self appointed mission to get book without karma. Result? The log that naruto smacked with the tetsubo crashes right into him. You definitely made me laugh more than once with this story. I can see how Thebeardedone's "kitsune power" fic was inspired by this. Good show. |
Lerris chapter 7 . 12/23/2018 This was amusing and fun... |
Monster King chapter 7 . 7/11/2018 Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it. |
Nihatclodra chapter 7 . 3/24/2018 Damn, it's abandoned... |
Ranmaleopard chapter 7 . 1/9/2018 This is just hilariously awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/3/2017 This was actually pretty funny. I laughed a lot, the entire "bugs bunny" thing with kakashi had me rolling. |