great story. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Best book ever make a part 2!

Overall it's quite refreshing, but I wouldn't kill the boy in the end, mental asylum and paralysis would be a dish served the best.

Really stupid! How could she fall for someone who looks like her story.

More BS

This was a beautiful piece of work. I was trying to find a Ness/Jake story that was more than a one shot AND it had to be well written. Only thing I didn't like was how weak Nessie seemed. She is still half vampire so I think she should have been able to kick a little bit of ass at least. Still very good though! 5 stars on my part.

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This was a nice story. Not exactly what I was expecting though

Well the last few chapters had me hooked! Great story. Still not sure about Jacob's and Nessie's characters, but it was a good read.

I just found your story and I am enjoying it so far. The characters are much more animated than they are in many other fics. I will probably have more to add when I get through the whole story, but I just had to stop and review here.

I would have imagined Nessie to be more mature mentally because it certainly seems that way in the original book, but it is your story and is a good twist.

She appears unduly cruel here and this story unfortunately highlights the pitfalls of imprinting. I was surprised to see Jacob referred to as selfish. He devoted his life to her, and he is selfish?

I'll try and get through the story before making any more comments...

I really enjoyed this story! The writing really captured me and I'm glad I came across it.

what the heck...? But I gotta, say awesome part with Nessie's dream...

Thanks for a great story, I enjoyed this greatly...

Awesome chapter

What a great chapter and I knew he wasn't trusted. I think the person to find her will be Jake the imprint bond