omg loved it! Got my heart racing. Thank you, finally found a good story after so long. :D

Good night. *fans face* This was quite the best-written piece I've read, regardless of fandom! Somehow you managed to stuff this puppy full of everything that, *ahem*, M-rated stories strive for while keeping the rating down to what I consider a reasonable level. Kudos to you!

I really liked that take on Ryane, Nice job. I like River not totally understanding whats going with her own body. So often its her mind she has to question, not her physical person. And Janye was the right mix of tough/rough but with a little bit of tenderness peaking out.

[swipe my brow] hot! Yikes. Need oxygen!

HOLY SHIT, do I need a cold shower after reading this one!Damn...I want me a Jayne Man! LOL

I have been looking everywhere for good Rayne fic! But everyone write Jayne so out of character, it drives me up the wall! YOU, however, kept them both in beautifully in character! I loved it so much! Sexy 'n sweet! Just like it should be!

Loved this! Just the right balance of naivete', tension, and desire. Fantastic!

This is amazing. Both of the characters were so in character and the subtle sexuality is steemy.

I keep rereading this story. It is so amazing and hot and GAH! I love the line "Naked me is all sorts o' shiny." Oh it so would be!

Oh dang this was the perfect River/Jayne story! The way you depict the naive yet intellgent River and the good hearted bad man named Jayne was perfect! GREAT story! Sexy and sweet

Oh yes yes yes! I like the story so much, it's so in-character . This is so hard to find a good Rayne fic! Would you write a sequel if I ask very very nicely? Please

KYAH! Very sweet and sexy! I love Jayne's line, "Naked me is all sorts o' shiny." Hilarious but cute too. Loved it!

This was really good I enjoyed it lots!

Yup, definitely sensual! Parts of that had me smiling and making the people at work think I'm crazy. :)

Glee! I keep reading your story over and over. I love it! D