Reviews for The Things We'll Do
krage chapter 5 . 4/20/2009
hope you update, nice story.
tinkrbell225 chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
great job love it is there going to be more?
tiarich chapter 5 . 1/8/2009
WOW - I have to say a really really great story so far. Fantastically written. Can't wait for more - Please please please post another chapter soon. Would have been great as a slash story too but I still Love it.
shylohjaye chapter 5 . 12/16/2008
. . .

It's Tuesday..lol

I'm just kidding. Take all the time you need. No need for a rushed chapter.

Have a good day!
shylohjaye chapter 5 . 12/12/2008
Gah! I hate it when my reviews get cut short and if this one does I'm going to retaliate by some form of medieval punishment. ]

The last review went on to say how wonderful I thought this chappie was and that I was going to keel over with a dramatic fake heart attack if Danny left CSI to go play with the bad boys.

Oh! -and me wishing you a happy Turkey Day, but now that it's closer to X-mas, happy X-mas as well!
ShylohJaye chapter 5 . 12/11/2008
Gah! Update this soon-I'm having withdrawals I've checked for updates three times this week!

lol

Happy Holidays!
Tavwen chapter 5 . 12/8/2008
Holy crap! Honestly, I'm a sucker for angst, and when it involves some hurt/comfort, and brotherly love I'm just on cloud nine - and you have provided all of that! There just isn't enough Danny/Flack friendship or brotherly fics around and I love them to death. So, because you have made my day, I won't even comment on the evil cliff hanger you've left behind ;).

I only have one critique to make - I catch some spelling and grammar mistakes while reading, and while I don't find it off-putting, others might. You don't have to take this seriously of course, I'm just voicing my own opinion, and I don't mean to offend but if you don't already read over your chapters before you post them you should proofread before posting. If you are proofreading, then maybe you should get a second pair of eyes to glance it over before you post - I get a friend of mine to look over my stuff too, 'cause I miss things myself.

That's the only critique I have - everything else is real intense and good, and angsty, which is how I like it. Oh, and I've also read Just Desserts which was also made of awesome. Just wanted to add that - anyways, I'll stop now, 'cause I've definitely rambled on way too long. I'll just say that I liked it, and I am also a sucker for happy endings (hint, hint).
shylohjaye chapter 5 . 12/1/2008
wow...this one was a good chappie indeed. I
murdoke chapter 5 . 11/30/2008
OMG. WTF is Danny getting himself into? Another awesome chapter. And I just checked my email, or I would've been bugging you sooner, saying WRITE MORE!
StoryDreamer chapter 5 . 11/28/2008
Oh, boy what is Danny getting himself into. once again another great chapter has been added to your already terrific story. Update whenever you get the chance don't feel rushed. ~StoryDreamer
ShylohJaye chapter 4 . 11/23/2008
Clinic... sounds like some great times.

I hope that everything comes out clean for Flack. He needs a break.

i love the fact that Danny thought to take him *and* filed it under his name so that nobody would know that Flack was ever there. It just seems to be something that Danny would actually do

Fantastic job! Hoping for more soon!
arwen0001 chapter 4 . 11/23/2008
LOVE THE STORY SO FAR, IT HAS ME CRYING EVERYTIME I READ CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
murdoke chapter 4 . 11/21/2008
Oh come ON! You're just gonna keep me hanging? Where's he hafta stop by? Write more!
StoryDreamer chapter 4 . 11/19/2008
Another great chapter, Danny really is a good friend. Danny telling Don he needs to get tested even though Don doesn't want to beacuse we know that sometimes when bad situations happen to our friends we got to push them into doing what's best for them or the right thing even if it's hard to do. Great update. ~StoryDreamer
ShylohJaye chapter 3 . 10/30/2008
Don as a character is very mood-swingish...so you can't be too hard on yourself if he gets a little ooc. Danny was right on cue though, if you ask me. Danny carries the weight of the world on his shoulders at any given point in the week...continues to ramble about Danny..

Loved it, can't wait for more!
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