Wow. Now there's a way I hadn't looked at it before. Nicely done.

That was heartbreaking, but absolutely beautiful. As much as I like to think of Rose and her other Doctor being able to go off and live happily ever after, this seems more likely. There is just so much baggage there, it's hard to imagine a small, ordinary life ever being enough for either of them. You captured this marvelously, I though. Just marvelously. It made me quite sad. Bravo :)

;_;

I never wanted Rose to love the human Doctor. It seemed like a betrayal somehow if she did. But my goodness I found myself rooting for him. Well done. I cried. Still am. would you make a sequel?

Well I don't know what I can say that hasn't been said already. I think this story is sublime in its execution, the way their relationship seems to degenerate with time (ironically) is captured ever so well. I love the structuring and the pace, how it seems like snapshots into their life, and how each one offers a new different perspective. In particular, I found the genocidal tenadency scene most poigniant.

So what can I say about ways this can be improved? Nothing. There's truly nothing I can think of to bring to your attention, no matter how minor, which is rare for me. It was a beautiful story and one which I have no hesitation about putting in my favourites.

It's well done. Sad, but not unrealistic. You took the time to explain why Rose was not completely satisfied and the fact that she didn't realize it right away. It's something they both learned about each other and probably both wish it were different but have no control over. I think of all the post Journey's End fics that are in this vein, yours is the one I'd beleive plausible. It's a fine line and you've done a good job.

This is so good. You should continue with it! :)

Great story.

I think you got it exactly right in the story which shows that Rose no matter how much she wants to will never feel the same way for the Human Doctor copy as she did for the his original.

Great work!

Great story, well written and you made good points about the unlikelihood of Rose and 10.5 finding real happiness.

Oh! Just so you know, I absolutely love this story. Because I don't see them working it out, and if they did, they'd have to start completely from scratch, and by then it could be too late.

Favourited :)

This is sad and heartwrenching and absolutely, breathtakingly good. It manages to convey *exactly* my feelings on the Rose/new Doctor relationship and it's written so beautifully that you can really experience all those feelings along with Rose, all her disappointment at the differences between the old Doctor and the new one, and then her guilt.

Absolutely beautiful.

This is truly awesome. Very tragic, and so true to what I imagine would happen.

Very nice story! But I'll have to say that I think that they would have worked it out, because that's how much they love each other... still, this story is very much filled with fantastical stuff :)