um when did her brother become pshcotic and kind of scary

More please

I love this story!Pleaaase write the next chapter soon-I cannot wait to see what happens!

I'm looking forward to seeing what comes of it.

I LOVE YOUR STORY! Are you still writting it?

This is probly the best hana-kimi story I have read in a while!

Ok, where to start :D First of all, I'm a fellow writer and a very avid reader, so i can say from experiance that you are an excellent writer! my cousin is also a writer, so something must run in the family xD

I have to say this is one of the best Hana Kimi stories that I've read so far, especially since i agree with the fact that Kayashima should've had someone special before the series ended... however, the 3rd and 4th chapters were a bit out of character for him. I love romantic things like that though, so i was squealing over it xD

your writing style and the way the characters talk is very realistic, book wise at least.

Again, i just have to say, i love the story, and am now gonna start chanting, 'I want more!' lol xD

Well, just wanted to say good story, keep it up!

also, I'm working on getting a story out, please come and review it if your able to!

Hey I totally read your story after I wrote the 1st chapter of mine! But i have an OC paired with Kayashima too,. And strangely her name is isbelle as well... crazy. I love your story! good job. Us Kayashima fans have to stick together!

I love this story!

this is one of the better fanfics i've read for hana kimi.

kayashima is my favorite character and most of the stories here are gay. literally.

i like how you didn't make isabella all mary sue and yeah...

i just hate it when OCs are like perfect...

And also, it would be great if you could update&finish the story.

the last update for this story was 9-26-09, and i know that was really a long time ago, but i'm really hoping that you could wrap it up.(:

One thing i admire is that there are nearly no grammar/spelling issues with this story.

my greatest pet peeve when reading fanfiction is that authors dont seem to care about using proper punctuation, spelling, grammar, and sometimes, they even go as far as to use text language. -_-..

i know i'm being a hypocrite right now though, haha.(:

i think the pace is perfect, not too fast, and not so absurdly slow like hana kimi was.

even if the suspense was tolerable.. hehe.(:

the original characters like taiki don't seem out of character at all.

we've never seen how taiki acts when he's turned on in the book so there's a lot left to our imagination, but the way he acts in certainly in character i believe.

the plot doesn't seem to be that original, it's not the first of its kind, but you've given yours a nice twist so it's alright.(:

you've described the characters sufficiently enough so that the reader can visualize them in their head, but not so much that it seems mary sue like. the part when she meets gabriel in the bathroom freaked me out too, so i'm satisfied.(:

i was really hoping that taiki and izzy would go all the way in chapter 11, but stoopid matthew got in the way.. -_-.

overall, this story is pretty impressive, i don't know why it doesnt have a lot of hits.

maybe cuz they're all reading the gay ones.

oh well, tootles.(:

The story is awesome!

Awesome :D Keep it up )

I would like to point out that the line "I belong to you- Make me yours." is exceptionally cheesy- even by my standards and I totally love it!

Taiki and his tea at the beginning amused me greatly and I just don't understand why... I'm a weird one...

My wall now says Clown Town or Bust in huge letters in honor of you.

And I really hope Tim doesn't kill Taiki...though that might be funny... sorry inner Rio lol

MY GOSH, PLEASE CONTINUE!

You have no idea how much i long to read what happens next! Don't stop writing, continue!

-claps and giggles- aeh-maze-ing! :D

I LOVE THIS STORY! My only regret is when it it gets really sexy, you cut it off! :) Hahaha, I still love this story! I gave you the review, so please update!