| Reviews for Erotica |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2019 Horrible ending describe the sex not the end |
 ReadAndDraw chapter 1 . 1/2/2018 shit! shit! The way this was written is just sooo good! Perfect! Seriously! I can't say enough how this came out perfectly. |
| reptoholic chapter 1 . 5/25/2017 hahahah |
| Hikari.Kuro1994 chapter 1 . 2/17/2017 This is the second of your stories that I'll be reading please don't make me cry. |
| ATouchofWinter chapter 1 . 7/11/2016 This was good. I liked how the Ninja Leader told the Captain he wanted more from him than just sex ;) |
| TaiLuv chapter 1 . 5/18/2016 Hahaha that wasn't what I was expecting of this story... It's so much better lol (*.*) |
| aniellet chapter 1 . 3/17/2016 this is so smutty and fluffy at the same time! i love it! |
| Essenceof9 chapter 1 . 12/3/2015 Where the hell has this been all my life? What a perfect scenario. Can't believe this was written so many years ago. I loved it Thank you ! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2015 love it. like seriously. i love it. |
| Anonomys chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 Kinda cut the fucking short. |
| Mine ShadowMaster chapter 1 . 5/3/2015 LOL it sounds good to ME too! *-* 3 |
| synchro chapter 1 . 3/23/2015 Hahaha this was awesome |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2015 Bravo! Loved the character development ;) |
| LadyPeanutButter chapter 1 . 1/17/2015 That line to end the story- loved it, looooooovvved it! :D |
| Taku chaan chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 NOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T END IT THERE ! AAAAAARRGGG I WILL DIE ! I was craving for the passionate lemon between the two here! lol. The final is just SO F*CKIN EXCITING!..I love their ''indirect'' conversation, revealing gradually how they feel and how much they desire each other *.* That was so enthralling, so good to read! Sasuke's struggling with his lustful thoughts of Naruto, and Naruto's final paper so emotional ! Omg ! The moment when he got furious at sasuke, saying ''That's hokage sama to you, Uchiha-san" I must admit I wanted sasuke to beat him up ! lol. But the reason behind his reaction calmed me down and the following part did the rest... I really reaaally loved the idea of both of them conveying their feelings by stories *.* Great fic! |
