Reviews for Because It Hurts
mazotori chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
god i relate to this so much. its so hard. 3 for u.
icy-piyo21 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
I know it must hurt... I also have a story posted on Fanfiction about my feelings towards my friend...
Kira chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
i love this story...ive read it like 5 times already...i understand completely how Axel feels...this story makes wanna cry when i read it...but at the same time i love it and wanna read it over and over again...ill probably read it again and who knows how many times after that...thank you for putting up such a great story ]
OutcastToReality chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
Amazing work, I really love that it didn't end all perfectly with Axel confessing his love and Roxas confessing he feels the same. Don't get me wrong, I'm a huge AxelxRoxas fan, I just think this way it's more... realistic. Because life doesn't always want to play nice. Oh, and I really hope that whatever is going on with you and your friend, that it works out. I have my fingers crossed for you.
tote chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Hi! Nice story. Parts were confusing, but they were all resolved I'm glad I read it. To be honest though, I found the author notes the most compelling part- and being the nosy person I am, I had to go read through the reviews and saw Shadow-of-a-Demon's.

On another note before I continue review, I'd like to say that I kind of feel like a stalker going through the reviews then making this, so.. XD; I don't know haha. ;

I know I'm five-something days late, and for all I know it could have been resolved.

But I'm... kind of in the same situation, and I hope I'm not just going to make a mistake by telling her, the worst thing at this point for me would be to hurt us both.

If you're still hurting; I just want you to know, any one with the capacity to love someone that much is a hero in my book. You're an amazing person, your writing portrays that, and well; I'd say she doesn't deserve you, but for all I know she's some kind of godly saint and I try not to judge people, no matter how much they piss me off at first ;. So, really, ... I've never met you. Maybe it's just a selfish wish that I want my own problem to resolve itself happily; but I hope... I hope everything turns out okay. If not with her, with someone else, be them male or female.

I'd add a catty response to parts of her review as well, but, well, I don't do that.

Good luck, best wishes. Please feel better :]
Silver Dragon of Evening chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
I think it came out wonderful.

I hope everything works out for you in the end.
Before-I-Fall chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Wow, that was sad and deep. It's even more intense because it comes from an actual life experience. I hope everything works out for you, and this girl must of really hurt you.

Anyway, nice one-shot. I really liked it.
shadow-of-a-demon chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Yes, Happy Fucking Birthday to me. GrrFace!

You frustrate me so fucking much and if my father knew I was talking to you (even like this)he'd blow my head off because you throwing me away is making him more furious than usual.

I don't give a shit if you love me or whatever, 'cause I don't think you do. Not like the way you apply in this story at least. I don't believe you are bisexual, I don't care what you say, I don't believe you. You haven't been with enough people to really know. Yeah, yeah, bitch at me if you want, I still won't believe you. I don't even know what to say to you anymore, your excuses are laugh worthy and to be honest I'm sick of them. You can't seem to see reason so I just don't know what to do. I'd love to still be your friend, more than I should really, but it's becoming increasingly difficult. You keep pointing out on how we've been friends since forever, but if I really mattered that much anymore you would have been at my party. I would have gone through all possible means to go to yours. The fact that you'd rather study is like a fucking slap in the face and then some. Well fuck you, thats how I feel right now. Not to mention instead of coming right out and saying you were going to Destini's you lied straight to my face. So don't say you had no way 'cause mutiple people offered to drive you. So stop the charade and if you really wanna keep me as a friend I suggest you fix this mess, since you're the one that started it all. Or if I did, than tell me what I ever did to start this... enough with the lies. And back off on the whole Leanne this Leanne that thing, 'cause if she wasn't around I'd be alone. And the thing that is the most fucking funny about this whole thing, is that a little while ago it would have been reversed. But I guess I did my job well, like always.

Good fucking bye!

Oh and you're story was well written like always.
xXInsanely Sharp NailsXx chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Nice.

Erm.. I'm not really in the mood to make a nice, long, happy, descriptive review.. not that I usually do or anything.

It was good though- no lie there. I'm actually still re-reading bits as I write this. No word of a lie..

Now, honestly, I think I should go and TRY to write SOMETHING.. I've been disappearing too much from this site.. plus, I want to read a thing of yours and Andrea's without having to be forced. Yeah. Forced. You should know what I'm talking about. Miss; I'm ignoring your self-promise.

I'm not going to forget that. Nope. Never. I may forget Matt's a dude, but remember he's a d!ck, I shall not forget your forceful-ness. Nope.

Now, I believe I've gotten slightly off topic, ne?

Nice story, Sam. Hopefully next time I can read something of yours on my own terms, hm?

Aha-

Loyally reading,

~Nails~
DarkHenrych chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
-O flabbergasted mode on- OUCH, that's gotta hurt. -flabbergasted mode off-.

AMazing grammar/spelling check there. Not a slip noted. -grants a cookie-.

Why is this so hurtful? Oh, yeah, ignore that... Anyways, love the emotion -this is really getting to me...- and I don't like it when stuff I read get so deep into me... You got my respect, this is a difficult deed indeed. For being so powerful conveying your emotions, I shall grant you a: GINORMOUSTASTIC Cookie. ... even my anime faces seem to have dwindled beneath the powerful emotions plaguing, condensing in this fic. AMAZING.

Love, life, time, luck, sleep and inspiration to you ! 'till later!
majesticlunacy chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Reading this story was like getting slapped in the face for me. (In a good way, this isn't a flame review).

I too have the same basic problem. While we've never discussed sexuality between us (being a sore topic for most sophomores)I'm bisexual, and I'm pretty sure she's straight. Since she doesn't know, it's not like we fight about it or anything, but it can be hard for me.

If you wanna PM me back so we can bitch/sob/be heartbroken together, please feel free to do so.

Luna
Azurela chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Awh, so sad. I feel so bad for Axel, what with the one-sided love.
RainyJ.T chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
You should keep going with this, even if it was just for Sarah! I know how you feel though, same thing with me and my best friend, hope it all works out for you!
RecklessxDreamer chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
:whimpers: GAH! that was so sad. D:

When I was reading it I felt my heart go all droopy and stuff.

And you sound like you need a big comforting hug! :gives you a huge huge huge virtual hug: I wish I could do more D':