I tried so hard to enjoy this. The concept was great, but the errors made it difficult to read. I'm sorry I can't continue it.

If your spelling is this rough in your stories I bet your professors have fits with your papers.

So if she thinks about being a clam she will revert back to her human self,that is so will we find out why he dumped his youngest daughter on his friends?

This is a response to the author's note in the beginning of this chapter. There is no excuse for poor grammar and spelling. So what if you don't use a computer with spell check, that is lazy and I personally wish spell check and grammarly didn't exist. If you would just take the time to read your chapters before you post them then you would catch at least 90% of your errors. It's pure laziness.

I like that they are travelling around.

Now they need to elope and get away from psycho Alice.

Now they should go to Forks and tell everyone hello/goodbye and then go off together somewhere alone.

It sure would have been more romantic if Demetri had gotten to propose. Aro is an ass.

Edward needs to give her up and make it easy on Bella. I mean he has done it before.

Them going away together sounds like the best idea I've heard in this story.

Bella needs to be happy that all Edward was to her was a first, simple, non intimate boyfriend.

Well, he didn't have an affair , but his crap was worse than Sam's.

Billy probably had an affair.

Nope... too bad Edweird

Too bad Edweird... And too bad Sam... I think Bella and Demetri should be their own pack.