my dear, i'm so happy you've updated! **

and i love this chapter! i really like Road, but she always appear like a sadic child. but i always thought that she also has a human side, and you made such a wonderful story about her. thanks a lot!

the only bad thing id Daysa...i like him too, but he already dead in the manga, so i was ready for that. but it still hurt a bit T_T

anyway, you made a great work like always!

hiya

this chapter is great! finally some Lucky action (YAY!) the parte with Arcas is a little sad, expecially when he said he want to became heartless. but he's the Noah of Despair, after all.

i'm really happy that you're alright! _ and don't worry about the updating, i'll wait patiently until October. the important is that you don't think about abandoning the fic and go on a permanent hiatus. i would be very sad if you do, you know how much i love it!

I KNEW IT! _ i knew it was Lulubell that shot Artemis in Cross's disguise. if Cross will ever find it...well, Lulubell is a woman, so probably he's going to kill her without let her suffer to much (or so i think...he is totally insane sometimes!).

this is a very interesting chapter. don't worry, i don't mind cannibalism. after all they are zombies, so it's totally normal that they eat living people. and the mission that the Earl gave to Arcas intrigues me very much...uhm.

and more than this what intrigues me REALLY much is how 'Tyki-pon’s holiday' will end...(eheheh, how evil i am!).

i laughed so much when i read the little sketch you made between Lavi and Komui at telephone (Tyki laughed too -) and also the cute part with Allen and Kanda.

ahh, nearly forgotten: THANKS for didn't kill Artemis!

anyway thanks for your update and see you soon(a kiss for you: pchu .)

You have done quite a good job with this fic.

It has intrigued me greatly and I am looking forward to reading more, so please update soon

DON'T YOU DARE! you can't kill Artemis! he hasn't re-encountred his brother yet...and there was that cute, little part between he and Lenalee...and i like him to much...

poor Artemis! you always hurt him...TT

i like the part with Hevlaska. she always seems like a mother for me. she has a very motherly behaviour towards the others exorcist.

see you :D

PS: no Lavi in this chap. and neither in the new DGM chapter. i miss him so much! TT (what Hoshino-sensei is doing with him?).

i think like you about Kanda: he's so cool in the outside, and maybe he dislike the most of people, but for his true friend (and lover?) he's very nice. i really like the fact that he's worried for Lavi and call him a friend ("Lavi is an idiot, and idiots tend to survive" was very great).

like also the double talk-to-himself of Allen and Kanda.

and of course i understand who is Mike. i'm happy that you made him help Lavi in his human form: in this way they can talk normally and it became very intereting, like the part you made about why Lavi fight the akuma.

thanks for have updated so fast. see you -

PS: good luck with your study/work! i'm only studing now and i nearly don't have time for do something else. i don't know how you can found the time to write this great fic: do you have super-powers?

you update a new chapter and, like always, i'm here to review.

why? because your chapters are always so great!

some thing to say:

- finally i know what is the power of Arcas! ok, maybe i'm a little stupid, but i didn't think he can control un-dead, i thought he can only with Artemis due to the Innocence.

but now i understand (i think this power suit him).

- the Yullen part is really cute! the way you made Kanda be nice with Allen is totally IC. yeah, Kanda-style. i like it.

- and Lavi: he is so cool in this chap. TOTALLY LOVE! and now he is alone...(eheheh, dark laugh of a Lucky fangirl).

but you have stopped at the best point. now i've to wait your next chapter. tell me, how do you think can i sleep, with this suspence?

now there is another thing:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i love this story too much! i want to know what came after.

you have update more fast than i thought. i'm happy! :]

like always, very good chapter.

the idea to make Artemis an artefact is brillant. and moreover the idea to make him obey only to Lenalee:

“Why are you crying?”

“I was sad.”

“Is sad bad, or good?”

“Bad”

how i love this part. Artemis is really cute, like a little lost robot that don't know anything about the world.

and now Arcas is a real Noah. did he kill Yeegar by himself or he only broke the innocence?

i like Arcas and Artemis too. i don't want them to disappear.

go on with this fic. i really like it.

bye!

PS: i get the snail thing, but i don't get what you mean by "getting bold"...

finally the new chapter! i was really curious.

i've read your "important news" and so:

- no problem, update when you can. if you'll make more long chapters, we can waiting more time for they. good luck with your work at the hospital!

- i'll continue reading your fic no matter what. i love it too much! and thank you very much for say also my name in your special thanks. I'LL FOLLOW YOU FOREVER! v

now, for the chapter:

-first, i really like it!

-i think you may a good work to explain how Arcas join the Earl. and good also the "type" of Noah you made him ("Despair" is perfect for him).

-who is Cross,you say? uhm...maybe Lulubell? the Earl say she was on a mission... but i'm not so sure (if it's true and Arcas will find it...ahi,ahi).

- YAY, Artemis is alive. phew...

ok, like always i've write to much! YY

but i've too things to say, eheh... but now bye-bye!

Wait a minute- Wasn't this a Yullen fanfic? D:

:C Hmm...

this time you've really SHOCKED me: i know last time you said "Expect the Unexpected", but that was too much...CROSS IS NOT CROSS!

ahh, and i don't know the answers of your questions!

i don't mind who is Cross, but i want to know who he had

shot?

(please don't Allen or Lavi!).

anyway update soon, if not how can i sleep well?

ah i nearly forgOt your question.

in my opinion before you can break it up in a sequel you must try to make an end of this situation.

after this you can write what you want in a sequel, like how the relationship between the characters go on and what will happen to them.

maybe it came out better, you will have more space and time to descrive the sitation.

so first try to make an "end" (or something similar) to this, then you can make your sequel.

i'm alredy waiting for it...

i will follow you forever!

...yes my head aches a little...but the chapter was really good. now i'm waiting for new revelations(i wonder what Noah is Arcas...).

and don't worry if you make "alot of assumptions", it's a fanfic and while you are writing the characters are only yours: you can make what you want! you are God!(ok, maybe not so much)

and now that Cross is arrived...things will get really complicated (for both sides). am i wrong? -

but i'm happy, he is cool(great entrance).

aah, you are super! thank you for not stop the fic.

i was uncertain of who was the Noah between Arcas and Artemis, but i love how you developed the story.

i can't wait to the next chap, i want to know all the true about the brothers(Artemis is not dead, right? tell me no).

BYE,BYE!

Oh! I am still reading! I love it! Most ppl probably just didn't read your story because your summery is somewhat vague, and you have the word OC on it (Yes, the OC-phobias). But once they start reading your story, they will know how good your writing is - a lot better than those story that got a bunch of reviews just cause they give fan services even though they have horrible writing! Remember, this is fanfiction: the best stories are not always the ones with the most reviews. Take a look - you have very few reviews, but most of them are rather long and in complete sentences! Not just a bunch of "Great chapter" or "Plz continue!" Your story is very original, with great characterization. Very fine writing - simple, yet in depth. Neither overly complex or overly lacking in detail and content. Beautifully done.