| Reviews for In Your Heart & Your Mind |
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Nad19 chapter 16 . 9/29 it's quite pretty, this story |
Nad19 chapter 8 . 9/29 I am amazed he didn't say anything along the word 'bloody hell's, I think I would |
Anastasia fan chapter 16 . 7/31 I love your story! It’s truly fantastic one, I d love to have some chapter one day . Thank you! I read it in one night |
Lexie Starfire chapter 16 . 11/10/2019 This is awsome so far hope ta read more soon |
Tuuna chapter 13 . 2/15/2019 10 years down the road and I read this note... It always makes me sad when a creator gets so much negativity that they feel the need to leave a note like this. I think this story is great, why else should or would I read it? :) It's probably waaaay to late to make a difference for you realistically, but I just wanted you to know. |
PinkandYellowKlaineBunnies chapter 16 . 8/20/2018 Omg that was such a cute story. I really enjoyed the originality of the idea! You did such a good job with the flow of the story :) |
Guest chapter 13 . 6/14/2018 I know you probably wrote this a long time ago but I never noticed this chapter and I thought you should know that I have read this story many times and it’s still one of my favorites. |
Nydon chapter 13 . 2/24/2018 Don't listen to those that are renting down on your story. I like it perfectly fine. It is fun and interesting to see Harry in this alternate reality. Keep it up I'm rooting for you! |
Adrestia of Winter's Edge chapter 1 . 2/24/2018 nice twist :):):):):):) |
Verity Grahams chapter 13 . 10/30/2017 I sent you a review on an earlier chapter, I just wanted you to know it was never meant to be a flame, or make you feel bad, which I assume you have had a lot of based on this note. At the end of the day when people type and then read it back, they read it as they intended to write it, its hard to pick up the silly mistakes, thats why sometimes we need someone to read over it :) Don't let haters get you down, and I understand you not wanting to use a Beta, I don't either. Hope people don't suck the fun out of this for you anymore, this is the only 'transportation to another world' fic I have stuck with! |
Verity Grahams chapter 6 . 10/30/2017 This is a cool idea, but sometimes the grammar and wording isn't great, and that makes it hard to understand, sometimes have to reread things a few times, nothing a good beta can't fix |
Guest chapter 16 . 10/27/2017 This is the end? He doesn't know for sure what's happened in his home world or whether he still 'exists' there. He doesn't know what would happen if he moved between worlds. is there a time difference? Is one day in his original reality one day in this reality? And what about school, Voldemort, friends, etc. in both worlds? I get the idea that you were just tired of writing it and didn't quite know how to end it, so just abruptly stopped. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2017 Is Harry going to stay in this universe? Only if you want him to. Pairings? What are your suggestions? I can't express my disappointment strongly enough to see these comments. This means the author has no plot laid out, no strong feelings about the story, and no plans. |
Kitty chapter 16 . 10/21/2017 Complete? Really? He just found out he can go back and forth between worlds and thats the end? Wow... |
kittyranma chapter 16 . 6/10/2017 A really up in the air ending. |