Oooh, this is great.
As much as I ship Ayame/Koga, I do think that her view of him is that of an idealized fantasy and that given the time and some experience, she'd realize that. Finding someone else (Bankotsu, in my own head canon) and having a real relationship would get her to know what real love is and that what she felt for Koga was infatuation.

I absolutely love this story. You're really good at writing the characters personality wise. Please do a sequel I beg you! I know It's been ages but I really want to see what happens and if Koga finds out or not or if that's even important!

I think that this is one of the best stories of yours i've read yet.. reallllly hot.. very in character... completely in looovee with it.. any chances of some romance? or a sequel to this? jsut curious... oh and maybe some Koga bashing as well.. i mean i know you like him but still just a little of that would be good, i mean he clearly remembered his promise to Ayame when finally confronted and he claimed that he didn't, i mean what a jackass! you can tell that hurt her and despite her not being around in many of the episodes i do sorta like her.

Dang. All that and they still don't Oh well. I loved it. It was so well written and drawn out.

Okay, this chapter made me laugh. It's not because it was bad or unrealistic. When Ayame was washing him and he flexed I couldn't help, but laugh. I think it's because I'm not a virgin and can picture my man doing something like that. (I would tell him not to get full of himself.) I thought I reviewed this story before; but, I guess not. Great job as usual. Looking forward to finishing this...

Yes sequel please I would adore you if you did!

that was the best one i have ever read

I LOVEEE ITTTTTT:DDDDD

Thank you for an Ayame fic! _ Now that I read it I realize that certain ways they make a good pair. I think you did a really good job showing one of the ways. Loved how they don't even know who each other is. Very cute & mysterious at the same time. But on that... the first time Sesshomaru speaks of himself in 3rd person he uses his real name. O_O oops. Especially since Ayame does not react to it. That's how I knew it was a mistake writing wise, not Sesshomaru's mistake. *laughs* As if he would make such a mistake after setting it up that way.

There's a few things that could be tightened up to make it smoother in the first chapter -just some cleaning up- but otherwise well written. _

Thanks for writing!

how koga react to being ignored by aymea?

It was great, although I think they should of got together evenutually... Will they?

this story was HOT! i hope you do a sequel to this story

OMM!(Oh My Me) THAT WAS THE BOMB! I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY! PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING THINGS LIKE THIS!

Someone randomly: For realz, G. This shiz iz da bomd.

Youkai, Miko, and Me: WTF are you doing here RAndom?

RAndom: Tryin' to b black, Dawg.

Youkai: You want him?

Me: Yes. *attacks RAndom with random dangerous and house-hold items* RAndom, YOU'RE NOT BLACK!

RAndom: I CAN B WAZ I WAN', DAWG! *runs away in terror with bruises and cuts*

Me: That's what I thought. *Smiles smugly with broken stick in hand*

Youkai: That's my pup. *smirks contently*

Miko: O_o I can't believe she did that. Youkai, that's normally your job.

Youkai: I know. *still smirking*

Miko: She'll take away you job and then what?

Youkai: *still in same pose, thought crosses mind, looks O_O, then looks mad* GET BACK HERE, PUP! GIVE ME BACK MY JOB!

Me: But I wasn't taking you job! I just wanted to get rid of RAndom! *cowers in fear* *screams* pumpkinpi, save me!

Youkai: *growls* pumpkinpi can't save you.

Me: *runs in terror while shouting* I WASN'T TAKING YOUR YOB!

I enjoyed your story. Sessh and Ayame make an interesting pairing that is not used very often. I hope you get around to doing a sequel. I would love to know how Kouga feels when he finds out that Ayame is sleeping with someone else and is no longer interested in him.

This is THE most amazing story ever :)

It was so cute!

i look forward to reading more of your stories!

Till we shall speek again

bye byeZ

~~Luff the one and only Ashes Kami~~