Reviews for He Doesn't Scream
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
Woah.. That is deep
Rep Glem chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
This is a beautiful story. It's so well thought out and smooth, I absolutely love it. I actually wish you would have continued it.
CelicaChick chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
This was a neat interpretation of Leo.
Maria chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
OK that is impossible, yet a really good story
NyxLied chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Beautiful and eerily sexy!
Kara chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
This was... so beautiful. I love it
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Great job on the story, I liked it, keep up the great work,
and keep on writng.
Yu-Gi-Ah 2.0 chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
wow this is really good. I love the floe of it very cool.

bye bye!
Medeah chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
wow, it was beautiful, first time that I like turtlecest...
quali chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I'm impressed by how well this fic captures Raph's character, and what he thinks of Leo. It's frank, raw, and to the point - just like Raph.
Jaded Scorpio chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
*is speechless*

Wow. You wrote this so sparse, every line cut to the quick, it was like a poem, a really good one. You made me like Turtlecest! :0 I wanted there to be more!

I hadn't really noticed that Leo's quietness consciously till now. I like it, yet I also wish he'd show more emotion or reaction. He doesn't really get to have much personality in most of his incarnations-"Leonardo leads", he's the best pupil, that's it. The others have hobbies, talents, but it's like Leo never fought for that escape from training like his brothers did. He's exactly what Splinter brought him up to be.

And here Raph seems to be trying to break him out of his mold, as fast as Leo can shore up the walls, but are Raph's intentions that altruistic? How much of him is just trying to get one over Leo? If you shatter the jar, does the plant inside grow beyond the walls or wither?

Any chance of a sequel?
Fallen Crystal Moon chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Wow totally wicked!

Ayume: For some parts it sounded like lemon...STILL AWESOME!
Pirate-chan chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Nicely done! This is a fantastic piece of work that you have written! The thoughts, the emothipns, sensations, i could feel my self getting loxt within the words! you deserve a standing ovation!
HatexLovexo chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
great story

hit that favourite button first

so awesome

to many words t describe it:

awesome, amazing, great, sad, inspiring, interesting

and more

luv it :)
Army of Smith chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I just remembered why you are in my favorite authors ;)
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