Reviews for Mistaken Vows
KingIchi chapter 18 . 7/27
This chapter was retarded beyond all things I have ever witnessed...

So jacob somehow silently turns into a wolk WITH the whole cullen family right there and attacks Edward?

You realize it would have been more satisfying if he was just annihilated right? No you didn't, in stead you let him bite Edward and cause Bella to get Injured once again.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/8
Did Victoria killed them?
Peter Facinelli Fan chapter 8 . 2/24/2019
So jake phased and that how she got her injuries?
nirvanachick05 chapter 19 . 2/3/2019
amazing
Guest chapter 19 . 1/31/2019
Amazing...so good i loved it.
TheMashMonster chapter 19 . 1/15/2019
Wow. I stumbled across Fanfic again a few weeks ago and declared that I would read through all the stories on both my Alerts and Favourites lists. I appreciate this story so much. Your writing style is wonderful, you've captured Edward to a T and it's currently 4:20AM - I couldn't stop reading until I finished it! Breath taking. Thank you so much for writing this piece.
Sassy Mami chapter 19 . 1/13/2019
Loved it. Thanks for the story. :)
Naja chapter 19 . 12/4/2018
I loved your story I broke down crying when I found out bella people died. I had to stop reading for a second and get myself together. Poor Jake tho
jodieq chapter 17 . 11/2/2018
probably a bit late to review this now (i read this in 2012) and im reading it again now- lol somethings dont change!
Hi chapter 19 . 5/9/2018
I loved it but think that u should make another fix or continue this one
Anna-Mae1242 chapter 16 . 5/7/2018
I don't even know what your doing to my poor heart by now!
agoogoo chapter 2 . 12/19/2017
a facking eedjit
agoogoo chapter 1 . 12/19/2017
Edward is an eejit
Wonderlistic chapter 19 . 7/3/2017
Good short story.
Grace chapter 19 . 1/29/2017
Woah! That was an awesome story! I was kind of ticked cuz you made Jacob evil and in my opinion in the twilight saga he had it the worst because the only reason he was attracted to Bella was because he was going to imprint on renesmee and you could tell how confused he was about his feelings of Bella . But seriously I felt Edward's pain and now there's a tiny hole in my heart grieving for Edward but I don't know why considering he got Bella. Your born to be a writer I swear! Even though I'm still kind of disappointed that you had to make Jacob the antagonist of the story I really like your style of writing so maybe next time you can write a story about Jacob and renesmee? Pretty please? Also no offence but there was way to much pain in the story for my liking and am I the only one who thinks that Edward seems a little unsatisfyed ? Sorry too end that on a mean note but I love your fan fiction and I really don't know why writers like reviews so much but here is one now since I have given you this pretty pretty please will you make a story about jake and Nessie? - signed your biggest fan ever grace
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