and that, is what i'd call torture

it wasn't even a drama anymore, it'd be an angst man

oh my god, it's so sad, i think i'm gonna cry :(

but the ending's kinda hopeful... i guess.

but still! :(

good job though! keep it up :D

Will This history have continuation? Please? It feels so nezavershenno.

oh...im crying~tears4 ichiruki...go0d job mr author-sama

aw that was so sadd! I do hope he wakes up soon [

Anyway, awesome fic. Keep up the good work!

This was truly wonderful. I love how you pieced the entire thing together with the flashbacks from different times and the different viewpoints. I love your writing

Ahh.. So sad but sweet.

I love the ending. I hope the miracle will happen.

Thanks!

ps: the title reminds me of a song. Paper Crane. XD

dat

wuz

great

sad yet sweet

And now I am tearing up.

Gosh, reading your stories was like an emotional roller coaster!

You make me cry... A truly exceptional piece of fanfiction, simply because its not easy to make me cry like you've just successfully done.

Thank you.

-Jitsu

Damn, that was awesome! I hate that you didn't give it a "proper" ending, but I love that the ending wasn't cheesy. So, hey, what can I say, I'm picky! This really was very good though. :D

nice, though the sequence of events is a little hard to follow

I love this, this fic broke my heart...

No words can do it justice, I love it...

so sad really, but I'm a bit confused, did he die?