interesting story, would love to read more chapters!

This story has got potential. Really nice. I would like to know what is really going on with oliver. Please update soon

This story has so much potential; why haven't you updated it in, like, forever? I love stories that are about pre-cannon Chollie, and there's so few truly compelling ones out there. This is one of them... but it leaves you hanging 'cause there's nothing more.

Manie Penguin

Please update

This one too, are you going to update soon? You left them on a cliffhanger! lol Your stories are really great, but they need to be continued!

interesting chapter... more update? :)

I'm so glad I've stumbled upon this story. Its really good, I'm so sad it only has 3 chapters! Hopefully your next update doesn't take too long, I noticed you've had this published for a while now. But other than that, your writing is easy to read and nice on the eyes. Lovee chlollie and a little triangle with lois! Please update soon! Don't make me beg! ;)

Chloe deserves better then Jimmy and I hope she realizes that soon. But what does Oliver feel for Lois?

Please let us know as soon as you can.

Yah! Welcome back. Can't wait to read more of this story.

So glad you were able to update! Hope you will continue soon!

cool so far...

I really like it. Please update!

nicee stoory

good idea

updatee plz

Just found this fantastic story. Can't wait to see how this story developed. Chloe is so much better suited to Oliver than Lois. Please update!

How did I miss this beautifully passionate chapter?

Good for Oliver for realizing how awesome Chloe is and that he wants to be with her instead of Lois.