Reading the first two chapters, I didn't get any hint of Max and Jude coming together the way it ended but I love the way they did! And I was pleasantly surprised, of course. Oh but it made me so frustrated that Jude wouldn't write to Max and how Max had that same fear. Great story though, loved the writing, all of it.

Interesting writing style. Very poetic. _ Keep writing and keep up the good work!

~J H~

How sweet. There's something about your writing style that is really unique, but I just can't place it. It's wonderful! :D

This story... so short, yet so amazing.

Really, it's touching and beautiful and it's just so... THEM.

It was complicated, but not stretched to the detail.

It was heart wrenching, but not paragraphs of depression.

And this part:

(again?)

(sorry.)

was just so... I dont know.

Something about it got me.

Amazingwork

You're voice! Oh, it's just fantastic! (lol, sorry, I'm still getting over the shock of a Max/Jude fangirl moment there) XD XD I loved the story, it's such a good conclusion. I love how personal the story is, I felt like I was really in the minds of the characters at times. Really really good! :D

I liekd this a lot, I think it senses more thier friendship, than love; and I thought it really describes the characters emotions the way Lucy was writing about Jude, and how Max hadn't gotten anything from him. I LOVED IT! This really was one of my favs so far.

Very well-written, which is not common in fanfiction, so take it as a big compliment.

Bookish0278

Oh, I am always wary of reading Max in Vietnam fictions but this has something different... I don't know how to explain it. I am the worst reviewer in the history of the world, I know, I know, but... I love it. Does that count?

I especially loved the part where he saw Jude's drawings. That really jumped out at me for some reason.

I'm really sorry this review is so bad, but I do love this story. I can't wait for more.

Once more, the tone in your writing is fantsatic. I really liked the layout of the piece, it kept it interesting and gave it good flow without it getting boring. I love Max's visions, they really conjured up great imagery and displayed his emotions really well. I can't wait for the last piece! YAY for Max/Jude! :)

Aw, poor Maxy! *hug*

I love the tone and layout piece, almost like a whole bunch of little shorts all tied together. It flows really well, and I absolutely love the way you've written all the characters, particularly Lucy. She's never really my favorite character, but you've written her really well, and I love her insight into the whole situation and her conversations with Jude.

Are you planning on continuing, or is it just a one shot? Once again, fantastic story!

I really loved that. It was so heartbreaking reading his dream. You got into the nooks and crannies and made it really raw in so few words. Very well done. :)