Update?

Emmet Cullen? WTF? This story is getting more and more stupid. There are no forces to remain silent. How old are you? I'm from Russia. I understand that we have different life views,standards of relations between men and women, the role of parents in the upbringing of children, etc. We're just different... But what you write - incredible nonsense. Violence,pregnancy,revenge... Where all the adults and parents? Social services and the police? Bullshit. Time wasted...Sorry

What the fuck? This author doesn't realize she just almost made Bella fuck another dude and has to fucking balls to blame Edward?

Like I have seen bad writing but this takes the cake.

I'm sorry, but this story is just to immature.

enjoyed reading

great job

So I just started reading this story & I have to point out two things. First you said Bella was dating Tyler but but Mike in chapter 2? I think it was Jasper's pov. Then on this one you have EPOV but its Bella's :) Just a heads up incase someone didn't mention it :)

what an awesome story

Loved this story so much

you said bella was dating mike in the last chapter now its tyler ... gets your facts straight.

Dude wheres the sequel? I want it... great start:)

ok I really like this story but are you still going to be writing a sequel?

Why does every story have Edward as a man-whore? It's degrading to the real character of Twilight.

I really enjoyed reading this little diddy and can't wait for the sequel.

I LOVE YOUR STORY! It is awesome. I cannot wait to see what you do now that Edward and Bella are together! Great ending