! The ending! The relief was real! I like how you made Shiho point out the difference between Edogawa and Shinichi, and how differently she feels around them both. It's interesting and enlightening to see how social constructs work in this case and how they affect the outward personality. Had I not read this fic, I wouldn't have known, or maybe I would have but in a much later date.

I wonder what Shinichi thinks though when he found Shiho beside him! Calling her sleepyhead and sharing the covers. Cute!

The ending is amazing

The ending was beautiful! So it was her sister singing the song all along! (Correct me if I'm wrong)

Aww. I love it~ It was very well-written and explained. I find it cute, too. Using the song to relate with the story is a nice idea. Good job! :3

I wonder why this wonderful oneshot has too few reviews.

The dreamy, fragmented and slightly melancholic atmosphere of this story captures my heart. Yet, at the end of the story, we feel the light and warm of a "new beginning". The song? Only one word: GREAT!

Among your stories, I like this one the most :X.

a simplle child's song into something so meaningful. wonderful job

Cool story could you write more, because I think it could be more than one-shot.

It can be a ShinichiShiho story. That is what I think, but you could let it be a one-shot.

Good luck with other stories!