Well written. I haven't really read any fics about the Fierce Diety until now, and I enjoyed it.
And I like that you wrote the goddesses as malevolent and selfish beings, the exception being Farore, it was a nice change.

What you have said has inspired me. I love how you gave each character a deep meaning behind them. I hope you can continue to write stories like this one. (if you want to)

I'd just like to say that this story or fanfiction as I should really be calling it was one of the best and most interesting I've ever read on this site. Even though you never really got to put everything you wanted into it I still believe you did an excellent job. Dark was one of my favourite characters along with Oni and the story line was very compelling (I was constantly waiting for the next chapter to be posted, I admit). Anyways, I hope you write more like this one and keep up the amazing writing!

Hi!
I'm Becky
And I love your story
Now... I don't know English because I'm Italian "
But I very love your story (And Dark XD)
well... this is all... I think
bye bye
Becky :)

P.S.
I apologize for any error "

That's a nice wish, good choice Link

I definitely am liking farore more right now, at least she still has love and care, and have the tendency to feel sorry. Din is Din, we can't argue about that, but right now Nyaru is just... messed up! What kind of deity just... do this? Deity creates and govern, but taking things this way just make them tyrant! So much for not being able to feel! They had anger management and jealousy issue gee!

Just please oh great divine being of author, please look after our hero, this has gone way out of hand, I wish Zelda's fine, she's a real tough one, she has to be able to fight back, like she always does.

I hope they'll be alright... I don't want any of them to die or anything. I don't want to lose Oni again!

And there goes Impa... I wonder what Link and Farore are up to...And...how Link's holding up...

This is going to get good!

What...what'll happen if they win and... and too much of their memory gone. Links' of Dark, Oni, Shiek, and his entire adventure?

Oni... He said the words! I've been waiting for this moment! We need a celebration!

OMg! Oni said it! Though, I have a feeling that Dark's still going to go out there to try and help. Or at least try and bring Link back to his senses.

*slowly claps* nice job, like always.

NAYRU YOU LITTLE BITCH
GRAH
NAYRU MUST DIE
SPOILT LITTLE BRAT OF A GODDESS

So, Farore is trying to take over Link? That would be an interesting fight.