The opening paragraph doesnt make sense with the rest of the story. The story itself is good!

Make more chaps

LOL You're not the only one who felt horny! Pretty little Pikachu's a bit of a horny bitch herself! Man, the Oquine Twins would get a kick out of this!

Yay semi-random sex... well done very nice fic

Friggin' awesome.

damn...that's it...damn...

Wow... She practically 'raped' him while he was asleep; she took complete advantage on poor Ashy boy! It was pretty good.

Hmm, that was interesting. But it was good. :D

Angelica

Oh hot, love it :D

shit... little detailed for "M"?

well written, though

very good story, but 1 problem... I didn't know what part was the dream and what part was sex

So you live after all! I've been waiting for you to write another and here you are! Yaayz!

Such an... interesting story you wrote here. I was pleased, surprised, and couldn't stop saying 'WTF'. When I think about it, I really do like this. So umm...nicely done? LOL.

awesome

Sometimes a plotless, hot little fic is perfect! And you did manage to put quite a lot of emotion into this one, despite it being so short! Enjoyed it :)