Reviews for Cinders
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
...wait, hwat? what happened?
rainboweven chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
Well..damn
Silimaira chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Now I remember why I don't read these . . . they always die. But this was thoughtful.
Marrype chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
that was beautiful...
Alalaes chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I really like your Ayako. I wouldn't mind an in-depth character study or another oneshot concerning how they met rather than how they ended. Thanks for the fic!
voidaccountdontview chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
W-what?! Author-San! This is... beautiful! Ahhhhhh!
Quantula chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Oh, that's so sad / Tragedies are the worst sigh
Please keep writing!
serp-derp chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
WAHH! You're so mean author-san! D'x Such profounities! ...Eh. Madara makes Itachi look sane. Now I'm just rambling aren't I? -_-''
CelesFe199 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
You are extremely amazing! And your stories... WOW! I LOVE "Till you die" And "Your lips are mine" PLEASE PLEASE make another Itachi story :D Even if it is just a short story! You are fantastic :) Thank you very much :)
Lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
I absolutely love it! It brought tears to my eyes when I finished reading your story.
Anon chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Oh... my... God! I honestly loved it! I have to admit, you're really great at creating stories! I love "Till you Die" and I'm still reading "Your Lips are Mine" but this is... sad but in a very good way. I loved it! Please write more Itachi! :))
Joanna Davis chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Wow... it was... stunning... so in the end he was hers forever, right? Cool... very nice turn of the mini-plot... and I wanna have Ayako's hair!

JK... very touching story...
kawaii-teddy chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Hello, I'm a big fan of your stories! (Sorry, I don't know why but I don't sit well with reviewing because I don't know what to say for the most part.) I was wondering, what is the link to the stories you have drawn? I was also wondering, if I am able to view them with google chrome. Please, reply! I would love to see your manga!

Please Reply, and Thank you!
Seoryx chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Perfect, absolutely perfect. You write with an amazing style, that gives off excellent touch and feel to everyone! ]. I'm very surprised to see that English is your second language. Keep on making good fics, or oneshots, like this one! ]. And yes, I loved every moment of it too!
romera chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Hi mersea

this oneshot is really one of the best I've read so far

so I must say that regardless it's based on a anime

it's very deep.
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