I've read both of the stories, and I couldn't stop laughing when I read them. Not only that, but you actually made Misa likable! I'm definitely going to read more of your fan fictions.

Really good work. I absolutely enjoyed reading it.

Omg, the fucking trees! Lol! Sadly, I can totally but that. that whole scene had me laughing out loud! I'm always looking forward to the updates for the story! its so addicting especially Mikami's craziness in the random guy that always seems to be in the same clubs L and Raito go to who has a libido on par with L's. I am a fan of said nameless guy. I'm really looking forward to more of the war between L and Near. keep up the good work! I wish I had a mere fraction of your humor...

Rainbow-chan

I love this story! The relationship, the love, the crazy, and of course the yaoi!
Please update soon!

Hahahaha...n then this yaoi admirer shall now make a formal request on update...
So pls update cause ur story rocks:)

I'm not sure if you'll receive this message or not, but I'm kind of shooting this out there to see if you're still using your fanfiction account. I'm curious as to whether you were going to add any more chapters to TFOF, since there hasn't been any activity on your account for quite some time. I would love it if you were willing to add the last few chapters to the story, although I know it can be time consuming. I hope that you do continue writing one way or another, I really love your stories and am a faithful reader.
Sincerely,
Haven't Given Up Hope Yet

this is by far my favorite chapter. just imagining Light attack L with a barb wire covered tennis racket is enough to make you laugh for hours. LOVE IT! :D

I have yet to meet a drunk like Raito, and I don't know if I want to either. That was AWESOME!

I am officially in love with you're story, really good job! I cannot wait for you're update.

no update? waaaaa

AWE-FUCKING-SOME!

dont make me sad, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease I beg you, UPDATEEE YOU'RE KILLING ME! YAAA!

L is hilarious wen drunk

OMG!...THAT WAS SO FUCKING AMAZING!KYAA I LUV THE PLOT IS JUST SO FUCKING FUNNY!YAY! PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS HYSTORY! you're just amazing!.waaaa i wish i could give you a virtual cookie dear, please update!

First of all, this is a Great story.

But I have some critiue too...if you don't want to heat it, thats fine, i just thought I'd give you a warning ;)

Okay, so for the start, Mello,Mattand Near are still just KIDS!I don't understand, how Light lets them talk in such a way and shout and fight all the time...By the way, I know these 3 are very intelligent, but there are some kids who still can't talk correctly at the age of 5...especially when thy come from orphanages because people there don't have the time to teach kids that well. (whammys is of course a special school, so it's fine...)

Then, there is no way L is that perverted and egoistic! If he'd really love Light he would at least try to be nicer to him...And what about his past? Did he fall on his head or something? L and Mello defiantly need therapy! Soon.

Im very sorry, I didn't want to sound that rude... :(