PLEASE WRITE MORE!
This is such a good start to what is going to b a great story! I've always wanted to read a modern retelling of Phantom! :)

I usually don't much care for first-person POV stories, not because I have anything against the POV itself, but because it's often handled very clumsily. You, though, have made a very good start of it, I am pleased to say; your modernization has gotten off to a fine start, as well. I look forward to reading more!

El

I like it so far. His mother now was kind and loving, giving him an imagination by the masks she made him. Her reason for the masks were to help him cope, not to shield her eyes. You have shaped him so carefully and his love for the arts is understood more, appreciated more. What a lovely gift he gave her on her birthday. Your story basis starts out strong and from that, we know how his mind was formed. More please

Amazing start, I love how Erik's mother doesn't despise him and that he has family to spend Christmas with. But I wonder what's going to happen when he's an adult.

I really like this so far and I can't wait to see more :)

Katie