Just read it. Love it

Cool story, well written.

don't like cheating when you love somebody you don't do things like that especially with her carrying his baby I don't know if I even want to finish reading this story or not that just ruined it for me

Ok i just read this story from beginning to the great ending and i loved it, don't worry what other people think of your writing because enough of us love it and love you even if you do love the drama and dragging things out but i guess that makes for a great story. keep up the good work i'll try to read more but i'm not reading the one with her and Nathan i just can't do it.

loved it wish you would write a Naley story with the whole gang in it just not with a whole lot of drama

You really need to work more about this writing style of yours,

if you don't even know how the hell the story go and then add the drama for the heck of it or just because you don't like the way Lucas is behaving in some moment on the show really please grow up as a writer you should know your story no try to pick parts here and there is really lame and so disappoint.

This character seams really immature and never in a million years i will think of saying this but Brooke here she is completely OUT OF CHARACTER and super slutty nothing like the Brooke Davis we love no matter what kind of crap you trying to tell us about she is 23 and that is the way people at that age behave is no true even the creator of the show portrayed her better she is 16 anymore and definitely she is no Peyton so i can see her being a cheater doing the same thing they do to her she have class and also a selfless heart.

Also you contradict yourself first you had her say she have to do the thing is better for the baby and then she act like at slut who doesn't even know what the hell she want just fooling around with a men that she just meat saying she is no in love with Lucas, but then what the hell she when to have a relationship with him in the first place a Little manipulate bitchy in her part .

If you where trying for us to hate Lucas you clearly Fail here i only see teenagers girl that don't even know what real situation in life meant agree in with you.

I see you don't even had the decency to respond and answer another reviewers that don't agree with you on this. I meant seriously you just Crap on her character SHAME on YOU.

This was an awesome story. Of course there was some parts that I didn't like at all but it was all worth it because at the end Brucas got together.

I like it

Hahahahaha! Laughing my ass off right now! Skills was the minister? LOL This was a really good story and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good writing! ;)

I like it

Aw, great ending, and great story!

i have to tell you, i would die happy if this is how season 6 went.

you are a great writer. and your story, is to die for.

keep up the good work.

sad that its over...but i loved it.

The ending made me laugh and cry. I laughed when Jamie yelled he won when Nathan dropped the wii padel. Then I cried when Brooke found out about surpise wedding and when Larry was there to give her away and I cried again when Skill annouced he was the one marrying them that the got ordained to he could. This was a great stroy and I loved it.

Tanya

Good story I loved the ending especially with skilla being the one to matty them.

All of there friend are great doing all of this for them. Thats what truly great friends do. Know what you want and go ahead and do it for you.