While I enjoyed the story I want to see it continued and expanded.

great chapter

This is the best story I've ever read. Please continue. Do not stop this story

Love the way you give us a back view of previous chapter to keep the context

love the ending

that was sexy

You wrote a nice & short story, but I do hope you'll get all the grammatical errors fixed during your edits. :)

it ended too soon makes a HUGE cliff hanger LOL but good

Nice and please do a sequil like with a wedding and a honeymoon and mabye a baby

That was a really bad ending... (

i hope u write better stories in the future!

what complete rubbish add some depth to your writing man.

OK, I got my happy ending! Yeah! It seemed a tad bit abrubt, though...one minute she's telling him 'No' and reading him the riot act, and then they're engaged. Go figure!

Thanks for writing!

Sure didn't see this happening! I hope there's a happy ending! :)

"...but we can always come make when we have time." (missing a word?)

'...He seemed distance...' [distant]

"...Old her with her and have kids together…."

('Grow old...' perhaps?)

I sure hope Harry gets over his fears with Ginny! (I am surprised, however, that he was able to mention 'wake up next to her' in the presence of her big brother! Brave soul!) ;)

Um, this 'plan' of Harry's seems a little far-fetched...would he really be so presumptious to turn the Room of Requirement into a bedroom? This could use some more proofreading also...lots of typos and spelling errors...including 'sick' in place of an important part of the male anatomy! ;)