Well written, but egg laying, colonial oriented, avian aliens should not have breasts

*claps* well done, I can hardly tell this is your first finished story. I'm useless when it comes to critique, because I'm not a writer myself and uh..I can only tell if I like a story or if I don't. And I liked this one a lot. I look forward to reading your other stories...

Thank you for a good read :)

Oh yay, Suzy's alive! Reading on...

...poor, poor Suzy. I hope that you didn't kill off Drog as well...

YEAH! AWESOME ENDING!...OH NO! IT'S THE ENDING! Oh well, at least it got finished, I seriously thought Drog was dead in Chapter 16. I suddenly screamed, "NO! DROG IS DEAD!" In a hospital, with my family, and my sick grandma. Then in the confusion read Chapter 17 and screamed, "YAY! DROG ISN'T DEAD!" he was my favorite character. Anywho a perfect ending and if you have any ideas on another Oddworld fic, (I liked Somethin' More and Paramonia) I'd love to see you write it. I'd also like to see you write 'Between a Rock and a Hard Place' like mentioned. Also in your profile you say you want to do a romance? That's pretty hard, I almost totally ran out of ideas for my romance oddworld fic, (not to good anyway) Well I'd like to read more from you...Man this is a long reveiw! Ah well, I still have a lot of characters left. So thank you for the action/adventure/mystery/general/humor that is Vula's Oddysee, and I hope to see a lot more from you.

Power ups to the people and power ups to you.

Mable

Nice job, I liked the story. Very well done, though there were some errors here and there. Keep up the good work. :)

Awesome and absolutly funny, somethings just made me laugh in this chapter! Well anyway, seems they're travling on foot now. That poor Chronicler! He was robbed! Ha ha! General Dripik went senile! "I don’t know what I’m doing here! What’s going on!" classic! Oh and Drog says awkward sentences! "So I’m gonna take my pants off now." and then he thinks it's funny. And last but not least, Varg dabbs the paint on his forehead when nobodys around, Stranger then Odd. (Name of a future fic!;D) So this is a very good chapter! I can't believe chapter eighteen will be the end...oh well. It's so awesome that the next eight chapters will be perfect! Update again soon.

AWESOME! Ha ha! Asking him to get on and take his pants off, absolutly funny! I would have been on the floor, pointing, laughing, and rolling. Drog has been acting weird to...jealousy? Because he has the crush I mentioned. (Smacks self) Never mind me. So the air at Rupture farms made Vula infertile, at lest there is another female. But it will be a long journey, maybe Vula and Drog will spend more time together, close time, like lo...That's it! (Smacks self so hard that ends up passing out)

They are finally off to see the raisin! The wonderful raisin of Mudos! Molluck is going to try to find her...but she is infertile so...If he found out he would be so...Never mind. Oh and I detect Drog changes in emotion, sad, safe, and...Jealouse? Nah he wouldn't...be jealous of Vula? NO! He's jealous of Varg! But why? Is he left out? Is he lonely? Does he have a small crush on Vula?...Nah probaly not...well maybe...Oh well I'm rambling on and on and on and...Vula and Drog?(smacks myself)Ah well, now I really AM rambling. I really can't wait for the next chapter! This is the BEST and I mean BESTBESTBEST Oddworld fic I've ever read. (The others ether stop updating or just aren't interesting) I hope you get Chapter 8 up soon.

It's great so far!...but...The chapter alinment is...

Chapter one chapter three

chapter two chapter four

chapter three chapter one

If it was just a accident or something you just wanted to try out I understand, but other then that it's AWESOME!

this is good, hope to see more

Wow! Awesome! Already at chapter three and so good yeah! Please update soon!