OH MY GOD this story is SO GOOD! like I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY? Like I've been crawling around the Cloud and Leon fics and that's how I found this one, but I think this is the first one to give me actual Kingdom Hearts ridiculousness vibes, don't know if it's because of the big cast but I really enjoyed this strifehart KH fic. IT IS A GEM

AWWW 10/10 I FELT SO MANY EMOTIONS AND THE CHERRY ON TOP WAS OUR LOVEABLE VAMPIRE CRYING AHHHHGHHHHH BYEEEEEEEE

Haha I enjoy the banter that goes on between everyone XD and I embarrassingly giggled a little too hard when Riku said 'they can smell fear' XD awesomenesss and yaaaaassss lemon was kn pooooooooint~!

LMFAO the translations between those two omg deeeeeaaad XD
And ohohoh Sephy gettin' flirty! Omg I cant evenn I ship those two soo hard as well ahhhh loving this so far!

Lmfaooo what an awesome chapter ahhh! I loved the wedding and I couldn't with Reno XD I love him so much
And awww Aerith is so sweet ahh and Zack poor guyXD having to deal with the trauma of seeing his cousin going at it lol and yooo lowkey multi-shipping heart skipped a beat when Reno was talking about Sephy and Cloud like ahhhh

this was the most beautifully fucking epic story i have read in my life time .!

Congradulations! I think that is the single best ending of a fanfiction I have ever read, and better than the ending of quite a few books, and if you knew how many fanfictions and books I have read you would know how big a compliment that is! :D I truly loved this story and have been reading it obsessively for the last 2? 3? days. Almost everything I can think of was tied up by the end, except for there sick mother, but that would have been extremely depressing most likely so I'm very glad to do without that conclusion. Thank you for all the effort you put into this. It's so well written! Happy writing.

Read this a few years ago and just remembered it yesterday. Wow, as amazing as the first time I read it. I love Cloud and Leon's personalities and how all the characters interact with one another. Still has me laughing and reminds me why I started shipping this couple in the first place. They're so perfect together. Wonderful story :)

Omg, I loved this story. It was so much fun to read even though it dealt with some sad and painful events. You are a great writer.

I don't know if you are still checking reviews but I will continue looking for your writing and I hope you're still giving us fan fiction. Thank you!

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story. I enjoyed the ride a lot. The characterizations were spot on for both Cloud and Leon and Zack too. I love Axel's portrayal the most. So his intelligence is always questioned upon, maybe because Roxas' family weren't too accepting of him, but then Axel says things that can be so downright sensible and not-so-stupid as he's assumed to be.

I love how you delved into Leon and Cloud's relationship, slowly revealing that they're actually very close, very intimate, in love with each other, but just didn't act like the "normal" couple as most ppl want them to be and so they sometimes take things for granted.

I expected more from the twins to realize the stuff their brothers are sort of blatantly showing but then again, I guess it's just too much if your own blood and family are doing things or have done things you don't want to be any business of, i.e. sex part, the kissing and so on.

The ending of how everything blew up and started falling into places of their puzzle was really good. The climax was something I didn't expect either. Kudos for that.

The only con about this story is that there are tons of grammatical and spelling errors, especially the usage of "he" instead of "the". Despite this, they didn't hinder me from enjoying everything.

Plus I love the dialogues. They're all so witty and funny. They also tell more about the characters themselves so it was quite nice to analyze them a bit too along the way.

I hope to read more of your other KH or CloudxLeon fics. Again, thank you for this wonderful fic.

Yet again I've read this, and it's still as amazing as it was the first time! You may be mildly curious as to why my review is attached to this chapter and not the last one, and that's because I especially like this chapter due to the multiple levels of no one knowing what is going on and thinking they know exactly and being wrong... As completely unrelated as it seems, a statement made by Jack Sparrow seems appropriate: "Unless, of course, he knew you wouldn't believe the truth even if he told it to you."

This is one of the few fics on the short list of things I recommend people read, it is that enjoyable, that excellent, and so engrossing you don't remember until you're at least few chapters in that you had plans today that are being ignored in favor of reading this. I recently made a new friend who I discovered also likes Cleon and this story was at the top of the list of what I suggested she read.

So, I know it's been finished for nearly three years now, but, hey. Thanks for writing!

(I actually can't remember if I've reviewed this before, but I'm doing it again for good measure because I like it.)

Woah, I've started and restarted reading this fic so many times over the years, but due to its enormity I never managed to finish it until 5:45 am today. It was absolutely worth it. Your writing has such a lively personality, and it's a constant thrill to read.

I suppose you don't write on this site any longer, but I had to leave my thanks. I'll surely be back to reread this wonderful Cleon epic in the future.

Thank you for posting!

Loved your story!

This was an absolutely amazing story. Not many stories can get my mind whirring and my nails chewed off in anticipation, but you did. This was so well written and deserves every bit of praise and flattery I can think of. My most favorite thing of all is how you portrayed Leon and Cloud's relationship, it's what drew me back and back again to read this story in its entirety. They were complex, frustrating, downright weird, and meshed so utterly good together that I was practically sighing throughout the whole thing. :)

I also really liked the crazy, but loving family atmosphere that you portrayed. In most KH fanfiction Cloud is usually the older brother, and the parents are either selfish assholes, abusive, or dead. I liked how you had a mom in there that showed true good parenting and selflessness of most parents out there.

Thanks so much for such a wonderful story and I hope you get to writing more Leon and Cloud stories in the future.

I love your story! I laughed my ass off on some parts. Everyone seemed so in character, -lol- I love it how everyone bet over Leon and Cloud! XD Hope you continue more stories with these awesome couple!

Take care! _0