Oh, my! A movie story unrelated to Mary Sue! And a very believable Selina! (although different from comics and previous movie)

Very good. The last chapter, I would recomend you to take that "job offer". Make something business-like, otherwise, Selina would not jump so eagerly to "work" in a peasant way after feeling freedom.

I already told you how awesome I think this chapter is, but I'll repeat some of the main points: Jon and Selina together as rebellious teens is perfect, and the feeling of invincibility you get from being out at night breaking the rules is wonderfully real here! The title change is appropriate too.

Good work!

Is Selina going to tell her about Bones and her Armless Master? I'm excited to see the sisters together again! You got the nerves of Selina down perfectly, too. Nice work )

More great work! You've done a solid job combining the canon comic characters and elements into the new film world, and that is no easy task. Not a lot of writers put that kind of research into their fics. Kudos!

Your characterization of Selina as being surly and self-sufficient fits the real world better than some more classic interpretations of Catwoman. That's what makes this so good for the Nolan-verse. I also like the quotes at the beginning of each chapter. Good work! And it's my pleasure to beta for you.

Love the comic canon elements you've brought into this.

Looking forward to your Selina's introduction to the Nolanverse! )

I love the fast pace of this story, have I told you that? And Selina's life is so real and fictional at the same time. You've hit the perfect balance. Great work, again.

Another good chapter. It's a pleasure beta-ing for you! I hate dogfighting - you have a great eye for unusual plot details. Keep it up!

Looks good so far! So sad and personal. My only piece of advice would be to pay attention to spelling and grammar, just a few errors here and there. Other than that, great job and I look forward to seeing more.