It was lengthy yes- but totally awesome! It's amazing. The style of writing you put as Peter describes each and every character with what HE SEES not with what HE KNOWS. IT was truly fantastic like you were looking through his eyes rather than looking at what went through his mind- it a very unique piece of writing.

Keep it Up!

Cheers

~dawn

Brilliantly written. I really enjoyed this. The reader is able to gain an understanding of who and what Peter was and how he became the traitor.

Well done!