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  Guest chapter 17 . 7/28/2012 Rushed it way to much. Other than that great writing! |
 Anonymous033 chapter 17 . 7/22/2012 It IS surprisingly hard :P I think it's because they have so much history between them that it's hard to resolve everything with a single moment. But you did well in this chapter :) I think it was in character, if a bit rushed. Favourite sentence: "You have to understand. I cared about you for so long, only to be shunned because of another woman... a mission, no less." Because yes, I do think that kills her. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 16 . 7/22/2012 Oh, this was sad :( it's sad, how she thinks she isn't good enough for him. But I guess she really does. I still think you hate mental health professionals :P it's really too bad, because we actually don't do most of the things Dr Penn does, haha. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 15 . 7/22/2012 I don't think the psychiatrist would've suggested that they take a break XD not unless they asked, that is. I get the feeling you don't like mental health professionals :P -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 14 . 7/22/2012 Oh ... my... They really don't fight in moderation, do they? And while I like the kiss, I don't know what he's doing, leaving her like that :( I get that it's hard for him, but she still struggles with her trust issues, undoubtedly :( -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 13 . 7/22/2012 It wasn't sucky :) I think it's good, just short. And I liked the "Daddy David" conversation. There aren't many people who could write about Eli David and not make him out to be a complete "bastard" who doesn't love Ziva. I like your version, about how he loves Ziva but can't have that leverage, because I think that it's probably true. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 12 . 7/22/2012 I'm nervous now :/ I'm hoping Peter won't find out what happened. And then Gibbs would get to them first! -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 10 . 7/22/2012 Ah, they've finally stopped being hostile :D sort of. Their arguments are really funny. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 9 . 7/22/2012 Wow. Things are getting interesting! Not that they weren't interesting before. They're getting MORE interesting. Yea. I feel really sad for Peter, actually :( but really mad at him, at the same time. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 8 . 7/22/2012 Somehow, seeing them having been kidnapped is just so funny. I don't know how you do it. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 7 . 7/22/2012 They have a different handcuff-lock configuration in Asia? ... I did not know that, which I should :P Although, technically, Israel is in Asia. But I guess you mean the Asia further East, lol. DOES she have a death wish? :O -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 6 . 7/22/2012 I think you could write longer paragraphs :) perhaps elaborating on the scene or their feelings. Because you're really good at their characterization and you have really good English, so if the story were a bit longer, it'd be even more captivating. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 5 . 7/22/2012 Oh, no :O How did that happen? I have no theories, but the plot thickens :O I'll go read the next chapter! -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 4 . 7/22/2012 Wow O.O I wasn't expecting that. Sexual harassment? That's a whole different deal! I found the last sentence hilarious. Abby's probably dying to know who's taking the couch, hahaa. -Soph |
| Anonymous033 chapter 3 . 7/22/2012 I don't know if she'd be that mean, hahaaha. But I can't see it NOT happening, so I guess it's plausible :P It kind of saddens me that Lt. Jamie Sampson had the same kind of relationship with the victim that Tony has with Ziva :( you'd ... you'd think that'd make them come to their senses, y'know? But of course not. That'd be too easy for them. -Soph |
