Haha! I love Shoujo-ai! I especially like how slowly and innocently you moved this story, a rare fanfiction feat in my experience. Asuna and Ayaka are so funny and cute together. I could never understand their relationship, but I guess it's surprisingly believable when you think about it, I mean today I was greeted by a forceful kick in the head from my best friend and a comment about my undignified laziness.

There are so many Negima yuri fics, but I wish there were more stories out there that dealt with non Konosetsu Shoujo-ai in Negima... Not that there's anything wrong with Konosetsu. They're adorable. I'm rambling aren't I?

I noticed that Asuna never specified in the terms for the challenge that SHE had to go the whole day without insulting Ayaka. I expect that that is the kind of loophole she might have fun exploiting if she were a tad brighter.

Sweet
I wish there was more

...where's Setsuna? I guess this must be based in the anime and before the Kyoto arc. As far as I am aware, Ayake still does call her Asuna-san. She does in the manga, when she isn't insulting her.

Hey! Please go on with this story! It was really nice))

Asuna and Ayaka are just a brilliant pairing. I like your idea for the bet and the sleepover.

Awww, that was a rather cute ending. I would have thought that Asuna would have given up first.. She seems more prone to be easily taunted by Ayaka. But, the dare was pretty interesting. Made them both realize something... This was a really good fic. :)

ah i loved this :D

you should make more chapters cuz its amazing already :)

Okay, I liked this.

I can't say much more than that, but I will note that, while done to the point of beyond cliche, the truth or dare aspect was nicely done. Kudos!

Hope to see more from you!

Oh, that was very well done. I like this pairing but I think they are somewhat difficult to do. You did a pretty good job at it, if I might say so myself .. Anyways, I hope you do decide to continue on with the story because so far...You've got me hooked. I ned more. Haha.

Well whatever the case, great work.

Awesome story and plot! Truth and dare...a classic. :P Please continue~!

Ja ne~

Hehe, Truth or Dare just doesn't get old. Hmm, I wonder if you'll update anytime soon?

A nice ficlet between the the fighting duo. Nothing says 'I like you' like a punch to the face. XD

As King of Britain, I command you to...

Please continue. Pretty please?

This is one of the couples that I go back to all the time to re-read their story.

not enough AyAsu fics out there.

I love it! There needs to be more! you should deffinately take this thing through. It'd be great to actually see them get together at a realistic pace...

Wow, nice plot. Please continue, this story has a lot of potential, and it's really interesting, even though it's only chapter one. Update soon! :D

A story on my 2nd favorite pair in Negima. I love your story so far. Hope to see how this story progress