Reviews for Control
BloodySpade000 chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
poor lavi
XShut upxJust goX chapter 4 . 4/6/2015
O... M... G! Kanda/Lavi Forever!
Hella-Chan chapter 4 . 12/2/2014
Kanda and Lavi forever! *fist pumps air*
Lol sorry about that, you're last words to your AN made me wanna say that in determination :)
Thanks so much for the interesting read! It was sooooo entertaining and extremely adorable (especially Kanda that adorable lump) I LOVED this fic! As a matter of fact, I'm gonna favorite this story and YOU author-san!
Thanks again for the entertainment, loved this story.
-Hella-
Guest chapter 4 . 11/18/2014
could you pleaseeee update the sequel up? PLEASEEEEEEE
ZakuroU chapter 4 . 9/12/2014
*finally works up courage to think of a review*

Heheh... I had a tab saved up here for a while, and I finally got 'round to it.

So anyway, I really liked this story! I don't normally read shounen ai or romance in general, but a friend recommended this to me when I asked for D. Gray-Man fics, so here I am!

I think you did a great job on this. I like how you portrayed the characters, and you seriously had me worried for Lavi at a whole bunch of times. But he's okay! Phew! And all the cuteness and fluffiness and angst all rolled into this story is awesome! Great work!

Thanks for the read!
Levy chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
Wow. I'm happy I just happened to stumble upon this cause it was pretty great. I don't think smut would have ruined it in anyway, but I respect your decision to not include any. Lavi/Kanda is my favorite and this fic did them justice. Thanks so much!
Dizplicity chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
That was the best ending this could ever have! I was glad it didn't end in smut. I feel like that would have ruined it. It was adorable, and made me melt! ;w; I was also glad it had a happy ending...I almost curled into a ball and died during the last chapter when I thought Lavi was going to die.
Thank you for writing this beautiful fanfiction.
Dizplicity chapter 3 . 7/31/2013
OH MY GOD. This is the first fanfiction that's ever made me cry. ever. and I read a lot of angst. ;_;
How could you trick me like thaaat? I felt as though someone I knew was just about to die, because you implanted kanda's feelings into my brain. Thank you for that.
But anyway, one thing I really wanted to point out was that small detail that you included. You said that lavi smelled of cinnamon and old books. That really stood out to me. because I remember those smells and it made it feel all that more real. Like I was actually there. Instead of just a personality he now has a scent, and I just really thought that was a good detail that made this fic even better.
Dizplicity chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
Why is this fanfic so sad! Usually I like Laven, but Lavi x kanda is a close second. and this fanfic is really making me like it a lot more. I feel saddened.
Dizplicity chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Wah! I really thought Lavi was going to die at first! Great writing. I really love this fanfic..I hope Lavi gets better.
AliceMalefoy chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Hey,

I read your fiction yesterday and I cried a lot.

I was soooo afraid for Lavi ! "

I thought he was going to die because I didn't understand that the "akuma venom's story" was a dream. I had to read it over again to fully understand it ! XD

Thank you for this story, I really loved it.

Alice (French girl who makes a lot of mistakes in English :O)
Guest chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
Haha. Well, I like this fic a lot, but I'm going to have to disagree about the smut thing. It's not that I think the fic needed it necessarily, I just think it would've taken what is a great fic and made it into an AMAZING fic. I wish you had actually finished the sequel you talked about because I'm not ready for this story to be over. Cheers!
dreamangelfalse chapter 4 . 4/8/2012
awwww, God! That was so endlessly wonderful, even if i was crying so desperately on Kanda's nightmare... But in the end: their love is my happiness. Thank you
Master of the Hellish Yard chapter 4 . 3/1/2012
Dear Dhampir72:

That was amazing. You did a great job with the angst, and while I prefer tragic endings, I think the bittersweet one of this was the best choice. The way you did Kanda's nightmares was amazing as well, fitting into the story and only showing as a nightmare once there had been death .

The fact that Kanda's aftereffects from the nightmare made Lavi think he was ill was amazing as well. Great job, very wonderful fic .

Sincerely,

Master of the Hellish Yard
StripedSweater15 chapter 3 . 11/9/2011
Oh my God I love you when I was reading the part were Lavi was going to die I was flipping hoping a miracle would happen. Then Kanda woke up and I was like thank god~ :3

Thank You for not letting Lavi die.

TykixLaviLover~
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