| Reviews for Control |
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BloodySpade000 chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 poor lavi |
XShut upxJust goX chapter 4 . 4/6/2015 O... M... G! Kanda/Lavi Forever! |
Hella-Chan chapter 4 . 12/2/2014 Kanda and Lavi forever! *fist pumps air* Lol sorry about that, you're last words to your AN made me wanna say that in determination :) Thanks so much for the interesting read! It was sooooo entertaining and extremely adorable (especially Kanda that adorable lump) I LOVED this fic! As a matter of fact, I'm gonna favorite this story and YOU author-san! Thanks again for the entertainment, loved this story. -Hella- |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/18/2014 could you pleaseeee update the sequel up? PLEASEEEEEEE |
ZakuroU chapter 4 . 9/12/2014 *finally works up courage to think of a review* Heheh... I had a tab saved up here for a while, and I finally got 'round to it. So anyway, I really liked this story! I don't normally read shounen ai or romance in general, but a friend recommended this to me when I asked for D. Gray-Man fics, so here I am! I think you did a great job on this. I like how you portrayed the characters, and you seriously had me worried for Lavi at a whole bunch of times. But he's okay! Phew! And all the cuteness and fluffiness and angst all rolled into this story is awesome! Great work! Thanks for the read! |
Levy chapter 4 . 11/17/2013 Wow. I'm happy I just happened to stumble upon this cause it was pretty great. I don't think smut would have ruined it in anyway, but I respect your decision to not include any. Lavi/Kanda is my favorite and this fic did them justice. Thanks so much! |
Dizplicity chapter 4 . 7/31/2013 That was the best ending this could ever have! I was glad it didn't end in smut. I feel like that would have ruined it. It was adorable, and made me melt! ;w; I was also glad it had a happy ending...I almost curled into a ball and died during the last chapter when I thought Lavi was going to die. Thank you for writing this beautiful fanfiction. |
Dizplicity chapter 3 . 7/31/2013 OH MY GOD. This is the first fanfiction that's ever made me cry. ever. and I read a lot of angst. ;_; How could you trick me like thaaat? I felt as though someone I knew was just about to die, because you implanted kanda's feelings into my brain. Thank you for that. But anyway, one thing I really wanted to point out was that small detail that you included. You said that lavi smelled of cinnamon and old books. That really stood out to me. because I remember those smells and it made it feel all that more real. Like I was actually there. Instead of just a personality he now has a scent, and I just really thought that was a good detail that made this fic even better. |
Dizplicity chapter 2 . 7/31/2013 Why is this fanfic so sad! Usually I like Laven, but Lavi x kanda is a close second. and this fanfic is really making me like it a lot more. I feel saddened. |
Dizplicity chapter 1 . 7/31/2013 Wah! I really thought Lavi was going to die at first! Great writing. I really love this fanfic..I hope Lavi gets better. |
AliceMalefoy chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 Hey, I read your fiction yesterday and I cried a lot. I was soooo afraid for Lavi ! " I thought he was going to die because I didn't understand that the "akuma venom's story" was a dream. I had to read it over again to fully understand it ! XD Thank you for this story, I really loved it. Alice (French girl who makes a lot of mistakes in English :O) |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/2/2013 Haha. Well, I like this fic a lot, but I'm going to have to disagree about the smut thing. It's not that I think the fic needed it necessarily, I just think it would've taken what is a great fic and made it into an AMAZING fic. I wish you had actually finished the sequel you talked about because I'm not ready for this story to be over. Cheers! |
dreamangelfalse chapter 4 . 4/8/2012 awwww, God! That was so endlessly wonderful, even if i was crying so desperately on Kanda's nightmare... But in the end: their love is my happiness. Thank you |
Master of the Hellish Yard chapter 4 . 3/1/2012 Dear Dhampir72: That was amazing. You did a great job with the angst, and while I prefer tragic endings, I think the bittersweet one of this was the best choice. The way you did Kanda's nightmares was amazing as well, fitting into the story and only showing as a nightmare once there had been death . The fact that Kanda's aftereffects from the nightmare made Lavi think he was ill was amazing as well. Great job, very wonderful fic . Sincerely, Master of the Hellish Yard |
StripedSweater15 chapter 3 . 11/9/2011 Oh my God I love you when I was reading the part were Lavi was going to die I was flipping hoping a miracle would happen. Then Kanda woke up and I was like thank god~ :3 Thank You for not letting Lavi die. TykixLaviLover~ |