I am such a huge fan of Leah/Sam, but for some reason, I hated him in this.

Loved it!

Not many people stop to think about what happened to Leah. All they see is a bitter, mean girl and then a blissfully happy couple standing next to her. But it took a lot of heartbreak to get to that point. And then once people realize that, they only see the heartbreak that Leah has taken on. They don’t see that all of them suffered through this story.

But you showed it perfectly in your story. I really liked the three different perspectives, because without each of their stories, you can’t truly see the picture as a whole. It was very well written and I enjoyed it. Great Job.

You did a really good job writing this piece its so sad.

Ps i so dislike Sam how could he hurt leah so bad... anyway some really good perspective in you story :-)

That was amazing. I like how you did it in different perspectives, and all the little details, and I think Sam should go chew on his own intestines.

Great job.

Urg. I am beyond feeling sorry for Sam (loser) but I hate Emily even more. I know it's hard to resist the devotion and love but she did have a choice.

This makes me want to write a fic where Sam cheats on Emily with her mother or something.

God, you've got me ranting and raving about fictional characters. That's why you're one of my favourite authors. I love this story.

aw

poor leahh

awesome story

it shows how everyone sees things differently

i loverrs itt!

This was sweet. Sam/Emily/Leah stories always make me sad.

But this was really well written.

o, thats sad...poor leah, no one ever gives her enough credit. good job

So sad, so beautiful. Wonderfully written, I like the different memories and how you make different people remember different things. Very vero-similar. Loved it.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Great one-shot! It was really sad!

I really enjoyed this, the repetition and all the little details. And darling Seth makes a cameo! But the part that killed me was Sam not remembering anything. Absolutely devastating, but so, so true.

I feel sorry fell Leah, but great story!

That was a great Blackwater one shot! I loved that line about Sam and Emily going off to live happily ever after while Leah is stuck in once upon a time. That is SO true. Was that originally yours? It's PERFECT!

Did you get a chance to sheck out the Blackwater AWESOMENESS of Endless Daylight by Princess Bertha, yet? It's to die for. She is currently writing the sequel Red Sky at Morning and it is equally awesome. I totally recommended 10 things I hate about you to her. It is a total compliment to her version of Leah.

YEAH BLACKWATER!

(BTW Don't think I didn't notice that you wrote this when you should be concentrating on Self Help!) I am totally BEGGING you, down on my virtual knees, to complete that wonderful story. Don't forget! I'm literally sitting on my laptop waiting for the email alert! :o)

I agree with Leia.

This did make me want to cry.

Lovely.

:)