Don’t speak to me girl is funny:)

Excellent work. You really put forth a fantastic effort and created a wonderful story. Very much appreciate it, enjoying every page!

ok to sum it all up I like your writing witch is good and everything even if a lot of the times the nobels made me want 1000 Zarakis all going crazy all across soul society and my mind instinctively went to the French revelution when they executed the king and other such events with nobles and dragging and swords though guts.

for ALOT of the soul society.
and uryu gota kill Maryui, or cripple him and lock him back up at LEAST its irrespoinsible to do otherwise.
Forget revenge that just something you've got to HANDLE you know?
I really liked the powers of Uryus reincarnation, they were quite nice.
I disliked how awesome Bakyua semmed to be in a fight type deal, that was annoying a tad but his character did some interesting things that even if I didn't like him a bit it still showcased very nice story telling.
now Ichigo he was a pussy.
So... Ichigo suffers form a thing like goku a lot. hes generally first contact spar with the foe but generally primarily hes a closer after everyone else already figured out the guys tricks.
Ive most respected him in his fights with Grimjow, the final (save for the ending) Kenpachi even if he LOST actually, especially because he lost seeing as he went down first because even though he lost the physical part of that battle the spiritual of it was WON about their differying relations with the Zanpaktou.
he won the soul of the fight if not the confrontation and I respect his charect alor for that.
and the one against Ikkaku even if it was shown that Ikkaku had a Bankai at the time but Ichigo as afighter earned it there.
Ichigo here he did the talking but that's not an ichigo thing to do with out blades involved, Ichigos a fighter and next time? don't be afraid to plant his ass into the ground in a fight, its good for the kid.
I liked ukitake a bit and it been better to showcase how much he outclasses others in this conflict but well you did do that a lot.
want to drag the nobels into the street and stab them, at least SOME OF THEM AND OF THOSE SOME SOME OF THEIR IDEAS.
I really liked Bakyua and Rukias bonding stuff, aint it cute? so you made very nic echarecters, well rounded in a lot of way even if at times I wasent sure if they were the charecters they were portraying sometimes but that's just differing views on charecters most likely.
all of this was fun and I liked it so im going to put it on favorites to find it again and Im curious aobut what else you've been up to...

I completely agree with your interpretation of Byakuya's character. Love this fic so far, will probably finish it in one reading :) Keep up the good work!

Wow. This was good. I really liked it. Definitely a fun story and the specu is very interesting! Not canon, but who cares - this is still awesome!

I say this - I didn't think Orihime was Niji for real. I briefly thought of Nanao - she has some physical features that resembles Uryu's especially after the time skip - but she was a child in the Pendulum arc so that scraps it.

Maybe she is a Shinigami though. Who knows.

-hands over platter- Magic cake for you!

This was an amazing read, start to finish. While I particularly liked the Bount arc of the anime, I think even I would have preferred to see something like this play out. Ishida is one of the most awesome characters of all time, and he totally deserves his own story arc. I thought he flew a bit more off the handle in this fic than he would have in the anime or manga, but it wasn't necessarily a bad thing; it wound up giving him a bit more depth.

If you're someone reading reviews before you jump into the story, just dive right in, you won't be disappointed.

Wow, that was really good. I enjoyed every moment of this. Thanks.

A great story.

I loved how Ukitake talked everybody down. And baby Byakuya was so funny.

They sure do talk too much during a fight.

Ow, that's a mess. Poor Uryuu. I can't see how he can survive this. And how does Kurotsuchi think he'd get away with this?

Ishida firing Kidou? That was quite something.

I wonder what he hoped to accomplish before he realized he could do that.

There were onlz two sealed zanpakutou in the vault? You gave the impression that there should be many.

And what is Kurotsuchi thinking? Knocking out a whole division must be against some law. Though in a place as crazy as the Soul Society...

You wrote Kurotsuchi really despiceable. And what was Uryuu thinking, going after him? Does he want to end up as a lab rat?

The zanpakutou is great. I'd like to see it in action.

And we finally learned what Shizuki did. I was close, but I didn't expect it to be that bad.

And I wonder what or who caused the miscommunication.