| Reviews for smaller and clearer as the years go by |
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   TangerineTea chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 Beautiful. I loved the last line especially. |
| Foolish Mortal chapter 1 . 10/10/2009 Very lovely |
| ERDG-Fiji chapter 1 . 11/26/2008 This is one of the most beautifully narrated stories I've read so far. The last words were beautiful and you did a good job writing Doumeki's point of view. |
| anon azure chapter 1 . 11/20/2008 SWEET |
| Alana-kittychan chapter 1 . 10/29/2008 Alana: aww that was so cute |
| yuMeNami chapter 1 . 10/20/2008 that was wonderful. really wonderful. i feel so good after reading this. although for me its a bit bittersweet. i still love it though. |
| Azamiko chapter 1 . 10/15/2008 Lovely. |
| Luna-Lunak chapter 1 . 10/14/2008 Oh, I like it so much! The atmosphere is so quite and calm. And happy. I love it. Hugs & Kisses & Cookies Luna Lunak |
| MeLaNch0LYdreams chapter 1 . 10/13/2008 congratulations! I cried! I listened to Our Lady Peace when I read this, sad! |
| Anyjen chapter 1 . 10/12/2008 That was possitively adorable, though it wasn't Japanese at all. If you wish to know why, I'll tell you, but right now I'm not in the mood to be picky. I loved the fluff. :3 |
| Sporadic Pineapple chapter 1 . 10/8/2008 glorious. loved this. _x~ |
| TheLadyPendragon chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Beautifully written. I'm just...speachless. :) |
